I hate everyone in this. No one was properly fleshed out and the NPC’s felt like caricatures of caricatures. I like the art tho
Now I need to see some wataru x hara action (づ￣ ³￣)づ
SPOILER!
Kiyoto was honestly so based for breaking up with Touji.
I know it hurt but it’s better to wait for what he really wanted instead of constantly feeling miserable knowing his partner had someone else at the back of his mind. This was definitely hard to read. Uncomfortable for sure but very beautiful and realistic.
People have a past and they have encounters that permanently mark them. I know in romantic fictions it looks so easy to ignore the main characters’ past or exes are used as plot devices but this is more accurate. People really don’t easily move on.
That’s enough of realism. I’m here for unrealistic romantic fiction with no exes, at least not significant ones.
This should definitely have a higher rating tho but I can see how it isn’t everyone’s cup of tea depending on what you expect from it
SERIOUSLY! BIG SPOILER!
The explanation of why he didn’t die was so last minute, weak and random after such emotion-heavy buildup but I am happy he got his happy ending
If you’re writing a psychological BL without a leg/ankle breaker, are you actually writing a psychological BL??
PS: So we never know why Won got couple rings with Jinseo???
Idk if its true but I kinda see it as Jinseo trying to have complete ownership over Won. We already know that Jinseo has a creepy complex with saving and owning Won, with him only being happy when Won was under his roof and covered in marks Jinseo created. So to me the rings were an extra set of ownership. Not only cause they looked a bit like a cuff but also because they resemble wedding bands. A sign of absolute loyalty. To Jinseo it was probably a sign that Won was loyal to him and not after his brother (as he seemed to have a complex about losing to his brother)
Hope this gave you some kind of an answer lol sorry if it makes no sense
My teenager self would be so proud of me right now after letting this cook for so long.
Domestic kabakura and koyanagi WITH A BABY ON THE WAY, Narumi out of the otaku closet, Nao and Kou in a relationship!!!!!! ┗( T﹏T )┛
I wanted to see their parents’ reaction to the rings (〜￣△￣)〜
I really liked the artstyle but HOLY SHIT hated everyone in this and if that was the goal of author-nim then she’s really gifted because she was even more than successful.
Spoiler from here on out!
Jaemin thinks he’s such a great mastermind but he’s the biggest loser coward ever. All his strategies or plans SUCK ASS.
Soohyun and Seunghyun are IDIOTS! The moment someone starts mentioning they’ve been PINNING for the same person for years. Why the FUCK do you think you can just change that? The worse is that Soohyun looks so much like my baby Seo-An from the pizza delivery man and the golden palace. And that made me angry.
Let that be a lesson for any inconspicuous reader out there in a similar situation. If someone you have your eyes on has had feelings for someone for YEARS or they’ve been together for very long. Don’t even try. Coz that is the love of their life.
Start gardening, learn how to play chess, read a book, join Tinder. Just don’t get into unnecessary drama because you’ll be signing up for straight up emotional damage. Look at the damn ending! Even though that stupid think chose Seughyun, he knew that the moment he looked back, Daon would hesitate again.
We’re supposed to think that it’s a happy ending but I know for sure Seughyun will just keep being anxious coz he knows at the back of his head he’s not really the only choice and it’s not like they left the country like Soohyun. Daon could run into Jaemin at any moment and then what?
He was an idiot in my opinion he should’ve just kept his distance like he was doing and see if Daon would actually pick him but since he has no backbone he had to come running back.
And the worse for last of Daon. Daon, Daon, Dao … Daon has the worse possible combination. He’s a push over AND a slut! You can’t be both at the same time. If you want to juggle between three dudes, do so with intention! I know it sounds horrible but it’s true. The entire time he acted as if he was a victim of his love life.
You have two perfectly working eyes, no glasses like his sister but he tosses his eyes and his brain off whenever Jaemin says anything. Dude you KNEW that Soohyun liked you (HE NEVER HID IT) and you knew you liked him but you believed that dude liked Jaemin ? I just hated him so much!
Jaemin wasn’t right about many things but one thing he was spot on is that Jaemin’s feelings are easily swayed. He will literally go for anyone nice to him when he’s feeling down.
He was down about being poor, Jaemin was there. Poof, he’s in love.
He was down when he thought he wasn’t good enough for Jaemin, Soohyun was there. Poof, he’s in love.
He was down when he was confused about Jaemon and Soohyun, Seughyun was there. Poof, he’s in love.
I personally hate these types of people coz you just have to have the right timing.
All this to say that in my opinion, I think the one Daon actually has real feeling for was Soohyun. They had the most chemistry but he did not deserve Soohyun. He didn’t feel indebted to him like Jaemim. Although Soohyun clearly was a little fucked up too for sure but he was the most confrontational about how trivial Daon is, which ultimately is what he needed, in my opinion of course.
Anyway. You know what it never was? That serious. I just needed to vent. If you read this whole charade. Congrats to you you made me proud