First Frost
94 excruciatingly slow
Makes me wonder if those people are fish from another planet ? They are both cold, they seem to never have had hormones and the drive they call.
I’m not saying horny tween stories are any better, but they feel more fish than human, they lack energy
Although many fishes are much more energetic than their
I’m grateful to the uploaderwho remover the useless half of each chapter around c8x !
How to Survive Restructuring
40 another of these extremely murderous earth destruction camp
Lucky the MC is not fine with hunting humans , and he is also going out of his way to save people
That doesn’t make him naive or a pushover, he will defend himself and his party, but he, at least has a normal mindset , not like to many sociopathic characters getting easily comfortable with murder
That being said, it doesn’t feel original, and the characters are not defined enough to make me grow attached
Lastly we’re definitely going towards an OP character, the growth of his new found teammates is rather slow compared to his, while he spent 3 bonus tickets on healing his disabilities. It’s very strange he is ahead of everyone in these conditions ?
Sounds Like
26- Very well written brothers story (and siblings stories)
Very delicate portrait of grief, damaged relationships between siblings, healing (there is a long way) and understanding
Plus a toxic world of stardom
Add a hidden murderer and a boy with bad reputation chasing him alone and your in for a roller coaster
Shall We Get Married?
16
Lets marinate
They obviously come clean to how they feel in c26, but it will be better if they have the resolve to follow through
Also I’m afraid of them saying they trust no one but each other. That’s super toxic and not the kind of thing I want to read about
Reincarnated as the Antagonist's Maid
34
Yeah well a 6 year old making a grown up’s heart beat doki doki
Either something wrong because she has a teenager ‘s body ( hormones ‘s fury)
Or something is very wrong in the kingdom
Sight
The Foreign Object was Me
35
Bad bad people, lots of mean archetypes
Tiresome business tropes added to a saint story (?!?)
Genius Archer’s Streaming
60 disturbing
Another forgotten genius, another accident an virtual reality bringing him back, fine
He’s a top archer, but also a ninja who moves silently, a yamakazi doing parkour moves, a hunter picking sound from the ground and shooting blinds that kills - yeah yeah …
But why on earth does a normal person can kill other people in virtually so carelessly ?
One needs to be congruent, it’s supposed to be hyper realistic, with perception being very real : our brains dating from far before the virtual age know nothing about games or virtual. The more perception are deceived, the more likely the experience will be entirely considered as real by the unconscious mind
Now get this facts straight : If the conscious amounts to 40, the unconscious mind’s power amount to 11 million.
Its faster, stronger and we hardly can pretend we control it with our tiny 40
This should be enough to be mindful of what we feed our brain in a virtual universe
But I am rather troubled by the total lack of of emotion of the character when it comes to killing.
I know it’s a game, but it’s supposed to feel real. He not shooting green pixels or characters from pretty 3D , it’s supposed to be realistic. Yet he has no trouble even when it’s not self defense, but pure murder / assassination.
From the start he shoot people in the back, when they run away and ask for mercy or help, without any hesitation
Then he goes into another toxic game in which players gather to kill each others « for fun », and goes on murder spree, including in close combat with a knife and he has no problem with it : aren’t bodies warm and breathing ? Does blood have no color ? No smell ?
This is so wrong
Our brain doesn’t make the difference between reality and fiction, it’s largely documented with movies and regular games … But what with augmented reality ? A normal person feels sick and is resistant to kill another person, so what kind of crappy trauma or sick reflexes or habits would grow from this kind of repeated experience ?
On the flip side, did writers learn nothing from neuro plasticity ?
When someone lose some abilities after a stroke, for example, the use of the right arm, reeducation can be made by doing action in front of the mirror to build new neurological path, by letting the brain believe the currently « disabled » arm is ok , because in the mirror it looks like the left arm which is not injured
It’s not like it’s overworking anything, the brain can learn new way, and it’s certainly not limited in it’s abilities to find new pathways.
Wouldn’t his virtual experience set him on a path to heal in the real world, by letting his brain construct new access with appropriate control ?
By the way I am not fond of another athlete in a wheelchair being the other super player , seriously, isn’t one disabled person already a lot ?
I Punished the Villainous Young Master, and He Became Obsessed with Me
33 same old with no surprise
Oh my, what a sad collection of terrible people
Lucky the MC is a very capable person
But why on earth ddi the writer need to make her someone who enjoys hunting ?
Shooting animals you don’t need to hurt and you won’t even eat for pleasure in that ? It’s sick :/
Three Delicious Meals: Just the Two of Us