The Time-Limited Black Screen Supports My Breakup
36
Cute - better translation
Mostly non violent MC, how refreshing ?
Poisonous Doctor: First Wife's Daughter
314 - maybe a 2.5 at the start ? But it became rather boring - weak, but rather harmless
It has some good points
The first is a very interesting MC . You cannot escape wierd hobbies ( dissecting corpses ?! :/), but she is more balanced and less extreme than the main characters a few years. For a start, she’s not excessively vengeful. In fact, she’s rather mercifully, she doesn’t old crazy grudges or do worse than her offender. Logically, she does manage to earn herself a few true friends from her straightforward and strong behaviors.
She’s an OP doctor who helps people in need, instead of an occasional butcher.
How refreshing
Sadly, the pace is all lost, as well as the side characters when the bad romance comes in
There are way too many flirting chapters, the Main couple becomes an insufferable binome, The guy is jealous, so out with the friends
The story also suffers from bad stupid villains, like the ML childhood friend, very predictable, boring as hell, and totally deranged
There could be a bit of a plot, but it’s rather lost in the middle of tiresome interactions
There are a few victims along the road, but nothing will come to move your heart, not even the loss of a random cute maid who made the MC cry for 3 panels before she goes back to eating dinner (!)
This is a bit disappointing, I enjoyed a competent and independent female without a mental disorder as the MC.
As it is, it is just good enough to sleep as nothing at all will keep you awake.
The Ugly Lady’s Secret Pouch
Duplicate of the ugly duckling precious pouch
20 - some good things
A girl wanting to escape 3 psycho poses as an ugly duckling - hence reversing ost common standards, she preaches for relationships without prejudices based on appearance in a society where bullying is the norm
I Was More Overpowered Than the Hero, so I Hid My Power!
72 - somewhere around 3.5. +?
It’s ok
The MC is a wierdo with a good heart, basically he has a hard time defining his desire and vision for a hero, but it’s akin to superheroes having a double life, one in which they are pretty much normal, the other being a super. Like old times superheroes both are distinct and his super existence is a secret
Now that we have the reason of the goddess (c71rnd of. S1() the limitations to his powers also makes sense
Now, it’s a world with very bad cast system, powers are again, only used for battle and destruction (of monsters mostly)
The MC is an interesting one, he’s amiable, doesn’t discriminate, seldom kill, only when extreme reasons are brought upon (very evil guys and monsters)
There’s a big bunch of nice side characters, but i honestly expected much more from the premise.
He is absolutely OP, and as soon as he started wearing a costume, he stopped hiding and lived in plain sight with his alternate identity.
He is obviously the main character and so strong others could hardly be a support and maybe that is where it’s lacking
The world and it’s monsters ers is interesting there are some nice concepts and a bit of plot
The dynamic of the characters is a bit disappointing
It does feel like a typical shounen, though there is too little background and depth to the many characters
For Snow White
38 - very nice story about a kind princess, with big heart who doesn’t let her fear of a terrible future affect her feelings and attachment towards her wounded brother, who might become the reason for her demise
Contrary to many prophetic tales, from oedipus to modern tales, she strongly follows her heart to give life to her wish for every one s happiness
True strength, without much muscle or super power
Simple yet authentic values, love above revenge,
What a nice change
Bluebird Lady and The White Lion Family
26 - poor
Slow and awkward storytelling , tiresome MC who lives in the fantasy novels from another life are a prophecy (common bad disease)
Children who behave like adults (so many authors never spent time with real kids to see how differently their brains are working)
Disappointing without mentioning getting 2 kid around 10 married and having them share a bed
(Get yourself a scare and check the age of early pregnancy)
I Don't Want to Work!
43 official (+45) - 4+
Nice one
The MC had a variety of rebirth across a thousand years , yet every special thing she can do out of these memories / knowledge is limited in number
Despite wanting to rest, she’s neither lazy nor depressed, she behaves like a mature person and makes sense
There’s a plot with gods intentions behind
Her disciples is mysterious (and rather obsessed :/)
Everything else is full of stereotypes ( breeds, magic, gods, etc ) but it’s ok
It’s rather entertaining and the pace is good
Beware of the Strongest Man Who is Crazy About Me
17 -
Very entertaining
The MC is very endearing, strong willed, perseverant and good hearted
There are plenty funny situations, enough tension to maintain a good balance and a pleasant pace
It’s very nicely entertaining
You Turned Off the Pain Setting?
9 - disappointing ?
Unmotivated addict playing the same game for the hundredth time
There are two universe, obviously her reality is pretty bad
Her character seems to be doomed from the start which has little appeal to the reader - it makes her super pitiful which is never a great trait
On top of that she’s again, oneof those autistic characters with little emotions, no personality or desire and crippled perception
Lastly she won’t bond with anyone as she believes she’s a player and they are just numbers making up characters of a game (why play ?)
We are being of emotions and connections, this type of MC is being denied the very core of our
nature, it’s rather hard to imagine it growing interesting ?
( plus it’s obviously a harem duh)
Enough with the Flirting