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As a lot of people are saying, this feels too rushed. In the novel, she was so beaten up, she could barely walk. She was hiding her face with some kind of scarf because of how beaten up she was and she actually spent days and days going to the train station trying to leave, but being unable to because of her feelings for Killian. She didn’t just walk to the knights, the knights found her sitting on a bench in the train station but couldn’t really recognize her because of how badly injured was her face. I understand they have to tone it down maybe, but her being completely unharmed makes the plot lose a bit of sense, since her wounded face was actually what made everyone realized that she wasn’t working with her family but actually suffered the most because of them.
We had like 10 chapters of the novel being dedicated to her feelings and her struggles, and Killian searching for her desperately. I was excited to see how they would portray all that but ended up being a bit disappointed by how this is going…