So I just finished reading this in one evening and I want to share my opinion with you, before the spoilers: -do i recommend reading this ?- eh kind of it’s pretty short I finished it in a couple of hours so I’d say yes.
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Now I’m gonna dive in the story so beware:
I really liked the premise, there aren’t many good horror/psychological bl so I was excited when I read the first 10 chapters; the story seemed really good and I was genuinely wondering where all the build up would lead to.
Unfortunately around mid story I wondered how that many questions would be answered, we have really just gone surface level with the MC and ML characteristics and possible motivations, the whole thing about ML that wants MC to be like he was before he lost his memory is kinda meh, just put there, I wanted to dove more into the past of the characters while the author barely gave us glimpses.
I also felt that their relationship could have been handled better.. I called their reunion way before it happened and tbh it felt kinda empty at the end (?)
I understand the message of the author of “we live in a fake society and yada yada” but that doesn’t make the story feel complete, that could have been one of the main topics discussed but it can’t be just like “it is what it is they have this curse that does this but they’re completely fine and will (probably) use it in the future”.
Give me your point for some resolution, you present me a problem but you don’t address it and I don’t feel the weight of what happened because it’s treated like it’s not a big deal by the MC “oh i actually killed people before but whatever I guess”, if the MC doesn’t care i don’t understand what the author wants us to perceive.
I feel like I expected this story to be kind of like Killing Stalking but I was left with a Walmart versione of that, and I’m sad cause this had potential but it was flawed from the first chapter bc it was the intention of the author to write it like this… and honestly I ran to the comments when I finished reading to search some kind of closure, idk it had potential but I feel like it was wasted on a story that doesn’t neither function nor deliver at the end 5/10.
Thanks for reading my rumbling feel free to share your opinion ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Pretty violent if I may say… NOW DO IT AGAIN AT LEAST 100 TIMES TO THAT FUCKING WACKO
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