beta
Hm i stayed up last night to read this. I was here for some smut but this is honestly not even wholesome smut, more like rapey-style and he behaves the same. I feel like her character changed drastically along the chapters - she was completely different at the start, very helpless but now she acts like a villainess? Kinda don't believe it cuz if she were that person she would have been like that from the start, but she wasn't. She had no plan and was a weak damsel. And i don't think she matured, it is not believable for me. The author just got tired of her I guess
The guy's character development is clear though - he falls in love and it is visible. But still I wouldn't say I like the guy based on how he acts. He is sexy sure but that's it.
The rest issss...meh