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This story feels like someone could reincarnate in, like, into the ML wife or something- cause why tf do we almost got this same exact story in a “I reincarnated into a villainess type shi” trope where the villainess and heroine is a reincarnated person, and the villainess is the good one and the heroine is the bad one that plays the victim. And we got this ML all up in their ahh and shi but like, I get it because like they said, “the ones with the most normal backgrounds are the most suspicious in cahooting with bad ppl” ig, which makes total sense. But DAM does it make sense for the MC brother to not participate in social thingys (AT ALL or at least I think) because they’re parents got divorced?? (Yeah I would get it if you don’t wanna participate in them social circles and party’s because they’ll ask you about it and ofc anyone would feel uncomfortable, I get it, for a while it’s fine but if the MC brother been doing this for a long time then something is obviously suspicious, and we already know the reason. But if he hasn’t been hiding from the world for quite a long time then, just disregard my comment on this matter) (also I forgot to say, in this setting for this story if they’re allowed to go to noble society once or a few times each month or year, then my whole point on this matter is deemed worthless anyways carrying on) I mean, if you could not participate in noble society I would also not go as well, if given the chance lol. But they dismissed it entirely and only deemed it suspicious once or twice at least. I mean, not like their ahh didn’t put a whole ahh Investigation for their ahh, idk, the story is good and interesting but the whole way of going about it, is just- yeah. Sorry most of this rant was mostly about the MC brother, I wanted to rant some more but I shouldn’t lol anyways I just felt bored so I decided to go full DOWN on this story and dissect it. Full concussion is that, the idea was good. The morals was there and wasn’t there for a BIT. It feels like it’s forcing their way into a storyline that DEF wouldn’t exist, and I’m not talking about the noble society, it’s like, your park coring and you fell due to a mistake and all of a sudden there’s a platform with cushion where you fell and if that hadn’t been there you would’ve been swept away by the water or you would’ve had hit your head realll hard or get a broken/sprain leg type shi you know. The MC ain’t all that bad but there is def some situation where you think, “who tf thinks like that or do that” like, BRUV your sitting down and you hear in your right ear where somebody said “Good day, young lady” AND IMMEDIATELY GET UP AND START WALKING AWAY LIKE SOME ROBOT- like, did you forget to turn to see if they were talking to you??? And also, idk why but I feel like she’s putting to hard on the innocent and kind act- idk maybe (definitely) it’s because I read to many of that “I turned into a villainess” type shi and most of them I read were the “seem to be a kind heroine but is actually putting on a act and turns out to be a fcking selfish person and the villainess that got reincarnated like the heroine in that, story their in, was actually the real kind and innocent person” lol but yeah I HAVE to stop yapping now lol have a nice day if you read all this lol ₍ᐢ‥ᐢ₎ ♡.ᐟ.ᐟ