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My honest opinion is, this fuckin sucked big time.
All the way to before the ending was perfect but the actual end was so so frustrating, what was the idea?? I physically cannot even phantom what was going through the author's mind. I actually feel the need to write an alternative ending for just how obscenely grotesque the ending was.
In my head, the ending is a lot better, I'll keep my ending in mind and disregard this pile of fuckin trash