Story ? Ass. Characters ? Ass. Chapters ? Ass. Trope ? Hella ass. Never explained how he can do the hypnosis, he can get anyone to do what they want, the mind breaking and nasty conditioning. The only sane character getting ruined dirty, the bullshit deus ex machina every time to lead into them fuckin... This manages to be worst than a regular hypnosis doujin. At least those are straight to the point with no bs dramatic romantisation... And the fact that great artists/authors were glazing this at the end... (I was hoping both the ml and the mc to die to end the pain of this on a dark note, that would have been far more interesting.) (︶︿︶)凸
The plot's all over the place lmaooo what is this...
Tho the ml looks like Goldbullet, its disturbing lmaoooo
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Fuck ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
Carol and tuesday???
Yeah lol but i was really confused seeing this in the top main page so i had to do a bit of funny
Lol thanks for the laugh homie and whoever downvoted this comment need to get locked in mental asylum
The idea of hero's and villans and the idea of a good protagonist that do evil to survive is interesting, but the execution and the writing of this sucks so bad. The mc gets the most evil shit ever happening to him for a pathetic attempt of being edgy and 'deep', the ml is one dimensional into crazy obsessive, but its so jarring, it doesn't fit the story and just makes him worse, and the rest of the cast is barely there, pretty much meaningless, when the appeal of the idea would have put much effort into the world building. All the scenes felt more of the focus and the story was worked around that, in a terrible way as well. (( If you want a fire darker story with hero like protags, a banger world building and beautiful sexy stuff, go read Badass (bonus monsterboys))
It had a good idea as a start but this is... So mid... And its going nowhere lmao...