I read this manhua as a past time, was intrigued and was enjoying the story until Ning Yiyi (the assassin girl) appeared on the scene.
At first, I just thought she was a passing character but she’s not. (● ̄(エ) ̄●)
While reading the novel, I got so fed up with her. Her and MC’s relationship started changing so fast. I guess they fell in love at first sight…
There was an arc in the novel where MC got accepted to the Xia Jing Academy unsurprisingly the assassin girl goes there too… then MC started solo raiding dungeons in the school to accumulate school points and money. Then, MC started carrying this assassin girl so she can level up so fast without doing anything. He even raided the same dungeons with her multiple times with nightmare difficulty not like it’ll kill our so OP of an MC just to give all the weapons that the assassin girl needs. Those weapons that he gave her are all rare drops from those dungeons that he raided.
My irritation is that he knew it himself that he would have level up more faster and efficiently if he stopped carrying her. THE MC himself had this thought multiple times yet he still does it….
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I’m really so disappointed with the story that even though I was brimming with interest to binge the 1000+ chapters of the novel, but after seeing Ning Yiyi leveling up faster than our MC while being carried is the last straw. I’m here to read the MC leveling up not having romance with an unapologetic girl who takes advantage of our MC to level up knowing he can carry her through the whole journey. Worst part is it’s the MC who lets her be carried while leveling up. He even asked her once why she level up so slow when she’s talented, her reply was « I’m lazy » and he found that scenario cute CUTE???
Ning Yiyi comes from a powerful family, her grandfather is one of the general. So she’s spoiled rotten since she’s a kid.
If I didn’t knew the story I would’ve assumed that Ning Yiyi is the female lead of her own novel u know those blessed FL that have everything and will have everything in their call
Ohhh well that’s the end of my rant since I dropped reading the novel.
Well I mean... I do get you... but they need it to "better showcase" just how op mc is... like bragging that mc can carry her, the others (that paid him) or even a whole party alone without them having to do anything and without mc having to say it himself...
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I didn't read the novel but at least she let him use that dungeon cooldown reset item no? But annoying by annoying for now I still prefer her to that black haired classmate of his... anyway... women are mostly only foil in most chinese comics/novel... no helping there... u.u
Omg! She's already getting on my nerves, can't believe she's a freeloader for more chapters (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
anyway, its Chinese manhua! This is the best we can get. The girls are already half-dressed, the fact that it's only her hanging on the mc is a miracle. And the best thing is that the artist has not drawn the mc as a pervert. He is practically the most calm mc I have had the pleasure to read in a Chinese manhua. He is very slow to anger, which is a great quality. We've all read those Chinese manhuas with OP male mcs that are fighting with every man they meet in every panels & squeezing through every nude female they meet (≧∀≦)
Actually, the “Find my sister” plot is not so important really from what I’ve read.
He started strong from the beginning so no one is his enemy.
His sister was also a genius as well.
She went to the academy where the MC is attending right now then when he arrived at the school her sister already graduated and went to the most prestigious and powerful “academy”. (Im bad with names sorry…)
So another delay to the the “Find my sister plot”, but during his days in the academy, his feelings towards the ninja girl has blossom so fast that I kept rereading the chapters wondering if I missed something.
Throughout this arc (academy arc), it’s just MC showing his OPness and carrying the ninja girl and some students.
After a lot of carrying people, there’s a contest amongst all the academy and that’s when he finally reunited with his sister…
Idk cuz I didn't read the novel... but I honestly see no feelings between them... like no flirting or romance development.. to the point I wouldn't feel weird if her gender was switched. Is it was a male friend and those flies were picking a fight with him (instead of wanting to f her) and mc helping him out. Their interactions are pretty normal between friends to me. It does bother me the clothes she "wears" and the stereotypical way shes made tho.
But yeah... by now I don't even remember why he's obsessed with finding the sis tbh... ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
spoiler.....
Jennette knows her parents very well. I'm reading the raws. Jennette also knows that Claude killed her father so she tries to take revenge. she's not innocent-
- This is a comment by a raw novel reader, not sure whether it’s true.
Edit:
I actually had to pay for the web novel... since I was getting impatient but here's another spoiler
Lucas and Athy kiss, I think when athy was 17-18
it was Lucas who initiated the kiss and there's a guy called Carax who is a villain, who is aeternithas
lol your getting greedy, here another one for you... Jennette's black magic is stripped off, her eyes turn green and she lived a quite life
I'm sorry if this is breaking your heart but that is what happens in the novel as soon as it goes
-This is not from me, I just posted here the whole conversation of our dear spoiler saviour so if you have any questions, I can’t help sorry
Seriously, she is pathetic. I know a lot of MC’s who has the same talent and situation as her but there is always a difference between those MC’s and her. This MC here is the type of woman who has the talent but lacks the brain. I know she is cunning and smart(in some levels) but she doesn’t possess the will to be independent on her own. I know that she is weak physically and financially but I really adore those other MC’s, even though they’re weak physically(no martial arts talent, maybe a bit) but they don’t depend on a man to achieve their goal. The male lead will only appear like after 50 chapters or more. But this one..... She’s way too weak willed to be an empress. Well I guess that should be expected because in the prologue, it was written that she only knows to heal and kill people using her medicinal talent(If you can call it like that). So she can’t be considered as a cunning fox or a dangerous snake.
At first this was very interesting then became boring then bland. I mean he has 2 experiences of living in this world so he should be smart and very productive when it comes to growing his forces. The perfect example is when he hunted those people from the evil cult then almost died if the masked guy didn’t save him. Then the masked guy told him: “You’re young, came from a rich family and have a lot of potential but why do you seek death when you’re just a fly compared to your enemies?” Seeee!! Even the masked guy thinks he’s stupid like bro chill you’re still in your teens, you have an eternity to get your revenge (If he’s smart enough to know what to do and not to do in the moment). You should make your forces flourish to the point that whether it’s the heaven, the earth or the underworld, no one can escape your grasp.
I’ve read a lot of Chinese mangas with this type of MC’s but at least those guys made their forces grow to maturity before fighting the world. Yes the FUCKING WORLD!! But this MC here only needs to fight the evil cult but ........ ( no more words can describe my frustration because of this guy...!).
( I really thought he died in his previous life then reincarnated but nope apparently he almost died so he reincarnated but his previous self is still alive....? This is the most unrealistic and lamest way to have as plot in this type of manga, like I believe almost everyone forgot that his previous life is still alive )
Yes Ikr
But I think the character writer created already was too good to be overwritten by MCs new life
And if he he was Reincarnated after his death then there was no point since the war would happened
Same goes for way past his birth CZ nothing have happened
As for him Going back in time with his own body, his setup is not good to make much choices and become fortunate and
Like we don't wanna see similar hardships
The writer tbh seemed confused and It kinda feels stupid.. But I don't really have a problem tho
Let's just say he came to a divergent timeline and that's why they possibly both exist
And tbh it's not wrong if u use interstellar logic.. Where u can pass urself running around a park if ur speed is greater than light's
It was interesting tbh cause he have memory of his "past life" while his past life still alive. I wonder what happen to his past life rn. I mean why cant he seek help for his past life? They have common enemy. He also can seek help from the masked man too. He doesnt have to do everything by himself which what I dont like about him. ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ
He is pathetic to the point that I don’t even care what will happen to him anymore. He either dies or be killed(disposed of).
You know this story represents the cliché story of an omega being together with an alpha thinking that the alpha loves him but the alpha only wants him to produce an heir, an another alpha of course.
The uke is always treated like a livestock through out the story then the alpha started liking him for real but still the imega dies after giving birth cuz he’s an artificial omega but also because once the omega produces an alpha baby he is no longer needed cuz he’s only artificial, a livestock.
The thing I’m really furious about he already noticed the strange behaviours of people around him (getting his blood, keep on injecting medication in his body, etc.) but he keeps ignoring it. Someone tried telling him the truth(he also remembers the things his mom said to him when he was a child about his secret and it all matched with that person’s information but he brushed it off in his head cuz head over hills to the alpha...... URRRGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
He’s just pathetic okkkkkkkkk........!!!!!!
Rawssss: https://tkor.work/골드-그레이-Gold-gray
ExtrA info( not sure cuz I don’t speak korean):
Apparently, the alpha loves him so much he even fought the board members of the company cuz he didn’t want the omega to disposed of. Then the omega became an official musician(not sure) cuz he keeps appearing on tv, tv shows, musical gatherings, musical concerts, etc. The alpha just became he’s sugar daddy to be honest. The only things he do is sex with the alpha, practice dancing, singing, sleep, eat, getting medication. He lives a very fancy life cuz at first the alpha( and his team in the lab) wants the omega to die after experiencing the the life of the rich(paradise). Cuz it’s like their way of showing “pity” to the omega. And y’all must be wondering why the artificial omegas are supposed to be disposed of is because their whole being is owned by the company cuz they were born in the lab, artificial omega but a real human.
It’s so complicated to explain....
Well if he gives birth there is a big chance he will die cuz artificial omega’s body are made like that in the laboratory. Once they give birth after a few days they die. The alpha’s father believes that once the omega’s role is done they should immediately disappear. So if the Omega give birth there is a 70% chance he’ll die. But I’m not sure yet cuz the raws didn’t show any signs of the omega dying but I saw in the raws a lot of time when the laboratory team put the omega’s body in a plastic bag(the bags you see the police are using to get the corpse of a person) when the omega is unconscious. And whenever that happens the alpha keeps stopping them.
i think uke probably die. he's an artificial omega which are weaker. it happened to seme's mother who did not live longer. she was bedridden after giving birth and died when seme was 4-6 years old (correct me if i'm wrong). seme's father said to him that his mother is nothing but only a reproductive tool. similar to what will happen to uke. the recent chapter will show that seme threatening the doctor. he said to her, if rain, you'll die too. your life in his hand. it doesn't occur yet but seme are anxious if uke will end up dying like his mother.
But we can’t forget the alpha’s older brother(he’s a trash). His philosophy is that omega’s are just breeding tool. So when I said the uke became a professional musician, during a piano concert of the uke, the older brother spread the video of the uke when he was young in the laboratory center. To ruin the uke’s reputation as an artist and as a normal person and also the seme’s reputation as a CEO. The older brother wants to become the CEO just to ruin the seme’s life. And because of that the couple had another big fight cuz at that time he finally learned the truth
(he’s stupid not to notice it from the very beginning that he’s an omega, he keeps hearing it from the doctor and the seme) that the seme only wants him in order to produce an alpha heir(at first).
Hmmmm... The detective in me says that since the “Villainess” changed, more like she is pursuing her freedom now instead of that blondy prince, I believe the same effect will also happen to that hypocrite of a heroine. Her expression is a like a devil in disguise of an angel. And that heroine’s lines(thoughts) really irritated me so much( when she said that whenever something bad is about to happen to her, she will always be saved by someone, SOOOO!!! She already realized that she’s special).
So the moral of the story is the heroine will become a 2 faced bitch cuz she doesn’t appreciate the fact that, she, the special person/woman amongst other, is being robbed of the spotlight that SHOULD have been hers.
I really hate this type of character in a story such a waste for her appearance.
Did the Emperor finally remembers Athy?
You see I’m a reader who stopped reading this story the moment (Claud or Claude anyway) the emperor forgot Athy cuz I’m freaking hot blooded bitch that can’t endure those painful moments that Athy will (have already) experienced. And I’ve been waiting for that miraculous day to happen when finally this pathetic of an emperor (but hot, handsome, etc.) to remember Athy but damn its been years (almost a year I think, no maybe 2 years) that I’ve been waiting but it still nit happening.
Sorry, I just want to rant.
I really loved how the plot was different, but I really am disappointed with our FL.
I know she had a very abusive past that tormented her physically, mentally and psychologically.
But I adore and admire any individual who, no matter their past, they don’t let their past control them. And if they’re hunted still by their past then they get rid of it to eliminate the “rotten meat”.
I even much prefer other stories of MCs fighting back no matter how little against their oppressors. I believe in the idea that if someone wants to harm you, but you don’t have the power to fight back. Then, I might as well die bringing them with me in the afterlife.
As petty and chaotic that may sound, the reason our FL is still being pushed around by her oppressors is because instead of forming a “back bone” or fighting force while she’s being abused, she went to the other route of being so depressed, etc.
I know this statement might sound wrong to other people because I know everyone has different ways to cope to different situations. ESPECIALLY ABUSE!
I just sometimes feel so angered by how she indulged still those people insulting and abusing her when she has all those capabilities to protect and stop her sufferings.
The saying really is true,
“Having great power, but not having the mentality matching that power is a curse”
-Written by me(● ̄(エ) ̄●)