Saw a video from lamy (@theyaoigorl) on tiktok about ch. 14 and it was like "what reading the chapter felt like" while she started into emptiness and "O'superman" was playing in the background...
Bro I'm getting worried now what the hell happened?!
Of ML turns out to be a toxic top at least I know that 3 storeys is high enough
Edit. Yeah ummm.... What is going on...? The kissing thing is already weird af but also what was that in the storage room????
I guess the depression was depicted somewhat well but the timesckips/flashbacks were often super unclear.
And not only the main character's but almost all human interactios felt sooo empty throughout the story. Very devoid of any emotions most of the time...
This whole story just felt like a bunch of trauma jumbled up in a hot mess, trying to convince the readers this series had a good story with a coherent plot
Still reading only to see ML biting the curb in 4K
and MC leaving that trash, hopefully broken and devastated lol
But like the redemption arc better be brutal for ML, that's what we all want to see
The relationship between the two was left kinda underdeveloped and we also didn't get enough of the song writing stuff. Like it feels like they're just fuck buddies when there was no proper confessions...
Bro not this manga tryna gaslight me like wtf s going on???
1. Why is the ex made out to be some good guy when he literally traumatised MC
2. What do you mean "actually it's good that I'm way more sadistic than what you have been asking FROM THE BEGINNING (like being a soft S was literally one of the ground rules) and you should just accept that cause I like you"?
3. What the hell was that thing about ML's COUSIN?!
I hate it when the uke gives in too fast TT
There should've honestly been more of a redemption arc, and Hikaru slowly coming around... would've loved to see Hikaru get angry and depressed to really show how scared he is and how much he hates ML
Also, the sage character was really weird in the way that he was just poorly written yk?
I feel like the black haired kid actually likes the brown haired kid and is only pretending to be engaged with Kotsu so that the brown haired kid gives up on Kotsu (cause he thinks brown haired kid likes Kotsu) meanwhile the brown haired kid already likes black haired kid back. Might be reading too much into this but BL is kinda like that sometimes so u never know
Jaehyuk, you're kinda being hypocritical rn tho... Like did you forget that you're not just forgetting to tell, but deliberately hiding, the whole apartment thing from Garam??? And you're also not being honest entirely about the money styff
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