This story was great af. Had me laughing my ass off, never took itself too serious, and all the characters were pretty likable- I know y'all hate Ordin cause he's toxic and Fenrir was there first but also.... so what? Jarn seemed pretty self aware to me and he was exactly where he wanted to be.
When the plot finally hit, I zoned the fuck in because who knew it was so interesting? I'm probably glazing it more than I should because they remind me a lot of my own OC's and their story. Ending was a bit rushed but honestly, it was probably the most logical way to end it(winter can't last forever afterall... but I'll stay team Fenrir).
The only way this story could've been better is if Jarn found a way to have both Fenrir and Ordin like he does in the side story(that last chapter is the story of my fucking dreams! PLEASE BL GODS, GIVE ME MORE STORIES LIKE THIS). Overall a 9/10, I'll probably be back to read again.
Aight. I thought I knew what was going on, but now I'm just so confused. What the fuck is going on? Who is who?? Everyone is just everyone atp- that or they just keep adding new people in the same people. Maybe I'll just let this shit finish and come back to try and read it again. Author had to be on something to come up with all this









Atp I just open the chapter and scroll all the way to the bottom, skimming to see if another character pops in or plot starts happening.... I've done this for about 5 chapter now, no progress.... whatever author, draw your kinks I guess, lmk when you get back to the story.