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Living the life of a scoundrel, Yoohan, whom should be preparing for his college exam, threats and a...

stories like these are edging me goddamn

I should let this marinate but it's so good ( T﹏T )┛

Hmm.

It ended.

I was exasperated while reading the last few chapters. This is... a story... fr. I'm trying to think back without re-reading it, what the hell was that about?

Terribly plot-defective. (This was line was translated from Japanese. They got some sick verses hahaha went for the throat.)

First, they gang-raped him. There were spectators PLUS they sold his damn tapes.

WHERE IN THE FUCK ARE THE ADULTS?

I think, that's the biggest plothole there is. Cutting out a whole ass age range. Incredibly convenient for the plot.

You know, I kind of understand it. Them not condemning those motherfuxkers. Cause it was not him. He was not the one that got raped. And so I can see he wants to throw some punches but it wasn't that serious for him because he wasn't personally involved. The world can be messed up like that. But it's still shitty though.

For all that he did go through for the original owner of the body you'd think he'd want him to be given justice. But in the end there wasn't even an altercation. Just a threat. They just let evil deal with another evil. And they live their lives. Respect, deadass. Live your life, pookie.

Anyway, I got to mention this because I kinda got secondhand embarrassment. Pookie said he planned it all. But got his lover licked in the neck, battered, and kneeling. Yep. Sounds like a plan well thought out. Planned to protect, huh? Silly.

That scene could've been better honestly. It feels like it popped out of the blue when the characters are foreshadowing it so hard. It wanted it to be GRAND. But it didn't even raise from the ground. You're telling me with all that that was what came out of it?

Rape, bullying, manipulation, mental illness, bystander effect, social heirarchy, nature vs nurture, trauma bonding, and many more. Those are a lot of topic to get from. To write a scene from. It let me down.

It's like it was controlled. the scene. The author didn't let it free. I could feel it being gripped. Always just threading along the topic not ever confronting it. And I wished, I always wish these for stories. But I hope those who can write isn't afraid to write.

There are people out there who might not have enough tools with them to fight the evil things in the world. Through stories people can learn. Instead of letting it go why not step unto the mud for once? Let the ugly be seen. Let it bring chaos. Let it bring discourse. Make people think. Make them mad. Make them feel heard.

It feels like people are afraid to write because when the public finds a target they'll run them through the ground. Always the safe option. Always the milder take. Always holding back.

I'm straying.

Haha

This was good but it could've been more.

I shouldn’t have read this at this point in my life. I’ve read several stories now but here I am writing this particular story a comment cause it ticked me off when I promised myself to look on to the positive things in life.

Anyway, I was planning to go off on this story but mann why was I expecting adult problem-solving when these are kids. Ticked me tf off when I haven’t thought of it that way honestly. These are some dramatic people quite honestly.

Especially that Jinwook(?) Bruh that kid. I didn’t even read that bg story other than it was a snoozefest, what a fucking prick that one. I can’t be in that one’s mind. I’d puke. Imagine creating your own poison then blaming other people hahshahaha sick ass motherfucker. If someone actually defends him under my comment go to another dimension and kiss his ass bruh. I’m so appalled by him, i’d be appalled by his fans too. I’d comment more but I haven’t finished the story. I’m at chap 48 so I don’t want to put a dot Dot on it yet.

Anyway, you really can tell that the mc is a fucking dumbass. But like he can’t help it really. You can’t help choosing bad decisions when you’re dumb, you don’t have the right braincells for it, ya know? Yeah, but shit bruh he lived in the fucking streets all his life. Went on to live his life interacting with people. Surely you’d develop some instincts and life-preservation.

Ticked me off when he followed that Joohoon WHILE KNOWING WHAT HE DID WHAT HE CAN DO AND WHAT HE MIGHT DO

WHILE KNOWING THE BODY HE’S IN IS IN NO CONDITION TO PREVENT ANYTHING OR EVERYTHING THAT’S ABOUT TO HAPPEN.

I can’t be that dumb, right? I refuse to be that dumb. Anyone shouldn’t be that dumb. And he got save by the ml. How though? Like a fucking miracle. ML immediately knows where he is. When (we were given context) they don’t know each other. mc didn’t mentioned him. And the timeframe wasn’t quite right but like manga logic bruh I hated that. I would’ve been impressed if he used his street smarts SENSING DANGEROUS PEOPLE but no bruh he really went in to TALK. What a fucking idiot but yeah what can he do really. The author branded him that. An idiot that knows how to throw a punch that has seen the dark side of life but is a naive virgin. Well, people can be that.

But yeah disregard the years he’s been crawling just to get by. You can’t tell me he was out there without his brains bruh surviving for 18 years. And now that he is in highschool with a bunch of kids… you’re telling me he lost all that braincells? Ticked me off that one scene really. And many more but it’s the character the author wanted him to be… it was consistent.

But idk I sense something but I can’t pin it down. Maybe because I haven’t read it yet. Hmm. That’s a long ass comment for something I haven’t even finished ticked me off I couldn’t restrain myself to yap.

I really don’t know what to make out with this story. It’s such a weird vibe. Idk.