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Ah. I made a mistake of clicking something and erase my comment.

Great.

Now what do I do.

Why in the lovely fuck does this happen only when I forget to copy my goddamn essay of a comment?

Shit bro I don't have feelings anymore. Fuck everything ╥﹏╥

Living the life of a scoundrel, Yoohan, whom should be preparing for his college exam, threats and a...

stories like these are edging me goddamn

I should let this marinate but it's so good ( T﹏T )┛

Hmm.

It ended.

I was exasperated while reading the last few chapters. This is... a story... fr. I'm trying to think back without re-reading it, what the hell was that about?

Terribly plot-defective. (This was line was translated from Japanese. They got some sick verses hahaha went for the throat.)

First, they gang-raped him. There were spectators PLUS they sold his damn tapes.

WHERE IN THE FUCK ARE THE ADULTS?

I think, that's the biggest plothole there is. Cutting out a whole ass age range. Incredibly convenient for the plot.

You know, I kind of understand it. Them not condemning those motherfuxkers. Cause it was not him. He was not the one that got raped. And so I can see he wants to throw some punches but it wasn't that serious for him because he wasn't personally involved. The world can be messed up like that. But it's still shitty though.

For all that he did go through for the original owner of the body you'd think he'd want him to be given justice. But in the end there wasn't even an altercation. Just a threat. They just let evil deal with another evil. And they live their lives. Respect, deadass. Live your life, pookie.

Anyway, I got to mention this because I kinda got secondhand embarrassment. Pookie said he planned it all. But got his lover licked in the neck, battered, and kneeling. Yep. Sounds like a plan well thought out. Planned to protect, huh? Silly.

That scene could've been better honestly. It feels like it popped out of the blue when the characters are foreshadowing it so hard. It wanted it to be GRAND. But it didn't even raise from the ground. You're telling me with all that that was what came out of it?

Rape, bullying, manipulation, mental illness, bystander effect, social heirarchy, nature vs nurture, trauma bonding, and many more. Those are a lot of topic to get from. To write a scene from. It let me down.

It's like it was controlled. the scene. The author didn't let it free. I could feel it being gripped. Always just threading along the topic not ever confronting it. And I wished, I always wish these for stories. But I hope those who can write isn't afraid to write.

There are people out there who might not have enough tools with them to fight the evil things in the world. Through stories people can learn. Instead of letting it go why not step unto the mud for once? Let the ugly be seen. Let it bring chaos. Let it bring discourse. Make people think. Make them mad. Make them feel heard.

It feels like people are afraid to write because when the public finds a target they'll run them through the ground. Always the safe option. Always the milder take. Always holding back.

I'm straying.

Haha

This was good but it could've been more.