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The MC strikes me as… well, dumb.
I mean, I’m still at chapter 4. But I want to comment cause fuck bro she just created her own misery. She’s dumb as fuck and idk if I can continue reading.
But I’m kinda interested. But she makes it so dramatic for no reason.
Do people just not talk? Mannn, I really can’t sympathize right now I’m so hungry. She can’t talk to his Father that she KNOWS loves her mom so much. She feels like the counTESS has more power than the COUNT HIMSELF.
Making the problem seemed bigger cause of being tight-lipped. She knows the count do FAVOR her. I get that she doesn’t love him or some shit but bruh use your fucking resources.
You’ve given yourself a chance to change your life by letting them take you away and that ha when she declared she doesn’t trust anyone. People change so why in the fuck don’t you tell your dad THE VERY THING HE TALKS TO YOU ABOUT.
The more I talk about it the more I get pissed off.
Also, I feel like the author is lost. She’s lost in what the hell the MC is. First off, she introduces her as weak. Then, could make a show as to not get bullied. Distrustful but open. And then, when she got older she was somehow meek?? When she was sly for exposing her teacher by luring her dad out.
If you didn’t get that, she USED her dad.
The author needs to get this maderfreakin straight cause it don’t make sense. Why she acting like she got no choice but be a damsel in distress.
Girl stand the fuck up.
It’s probably for the plot. I know that but fuck.
Come on.