I remembered I finished this just recently but I just rated. Now I have no fucking clue what I thought of this.
Hmm.
There was a memorable scene I remember.
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It felt poetic. The house that held their memories came crashing down as they were leaving. It was most probably just because the house was really on its last leg (having been flooded for years) and they boombayah in that weak ass building. Good for them, us. Me. It was reunion sex. Yep.
So RIP. You've serviced the family well. But it was poetic, felt poetic... really. at least to me. Plus, in the place where his mother died, her remains were surrounded by a garden of roses. It was once a barren land. The sea had risen. It was a sign of the times telling them there was no other way but to change.
If I had any more brain cells I could've come up with some sob shit but I'm just cold. Too cold. May the tides in my life change in my favor.
Nicely drawn really. But it was horridly boring. Don't quote me on anything tho I just had to cut it off at chap 5.
I was really just here coz of that dragon on her neck. I love dragons. Made me curious. but i skipped to 13 then to 39, I don't think I saw any dragons. Nor eggs, not sure I scrolled way too fast.
I just remember that something I read somewhere...
If someone's watching your life (like a series) what do you think they'd think of it? It really made me think of that reading this. Like an eye opener. You have every potential to go or be something. But you're held back by your fears or just plain laziness. Now we can all choose how we live our lives so I will choose to not continue this coz heck I'm always reading and playing games. I don't need the main character to be like me just bed couch floor or wherever-rotting I need them to live a life outside, for me ya know..
Bruh why even comment on this in the first place, I know freedom and all but this just gives off a bad vibe to ppl who are interested and are turned off because of comments like these who complain when they didn't even read the whole damn thing.
There were dragons, in the latest chapter it was almost specifically about dragons, you just didn't look, like at all. You then complain about the protagonist never going outside when you just said you stopped at chapter five, which like???? God I literally cant stand ppl who can't give five minutes to find what they want before writing their stupid fucking complaints. Don't like it, give it a 1 star, and leave like???
"Now we can all choose how we live our lives so I will choose to not continue this coz heck I'm always reading and playing games." Like why did you even fckn write this if you're 'choosing' not to continue as if you had any other complaints than half-assed assumptions about something you didn't even go through a quarter of it. This is literally why so many good concepts and stories get shit on and then pushed to the back while the mainstream copy and paste garbage is glorified. It's because people don't understand the concept of not liking a story and just dropping it without leaving some scathing reply that will influence others to stay away from it.
Holy fuck. wtv you just pissed me off with this comment, not really personal bcs ive had this bubbling for a while because other people with zero god damn common sense just post whatever they want and then complain when nothing new or unique to the genre gets put out into the world.
but kinda personal bcs holy fuck you have to be idiotic to only read five chapters and think your opinion will ever be valid on a series. its literally like buying a cake but not eating it because it looked good on the box but when you opened it up it was somewhat deformed.
fck this is probably too much but I literally don't give a damn anymore. If people can put this kind of stupid bullshit online than I think I'm at least allowed to fucking rip a new one on illterates.
What a hideous take. You're so fucking pressed people won't... specifically ME won't give this a chance?? What an actual fuck. This story won't change for shit even if I don't like it. People will come if they vibe with the early chapter. People can not like things you like. Get over it. Unclench.
And this is where the illiteracy and failure to comprehend shit comes into play.
One, I did not say anything about being mad about people not giving this a chance. I'm mad because you read five chapters in and left a pretty horrible review that can and will influence people not to read a story, which does happen because people look at comments and reviews to see if something is worthwhile.
Two, it was also the fact that you left so much misinformation in your comment that also pissed me off, which again was because you only read five fucking chapters and thought you were entitled to commenting on something you never finished like???
And finally third, if your going to reply to someone, make sure you're grammar and your spelling is correct and maybe then someone will actually take your sorry ass serious for one
First off, you are taking me seriously. You can’t even see that for yourself huh? I can’t understand what you wrote for you. You are pressed people won’t give it a chance. Maybe read what you wrote. Or think about it. Geez. All for fucking nothing. Bfr.
Yes, I am taking you seriously because that's what you're supposed to do when reading a review while also taking replies into account.
I do not understand what you mean by "I can't understand what you wrote for you."
I already rebuffed and explained why I was mad or as you say "pressed".
I believe that it's you who should think, read, and then write before trying to reply because this is frankly embarrassing. And again, try to fix your spelling for once.
Mann this is pathetic hahahaha
I was reading another story... and when I read this I mistakenly thought this was 70+ chapters. Like a fucking dumbass ARGHHH ANOTHER ONE ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
This is too good. I feel so shit... reading this when its only up to here.
This might just kill me. I hope this won't take years.
Please please please ( T﹏T )
HE SAID
isn't this amount of discharge bound to dehydrate you
GOOD LORD HAHSHAHAHAHAAHAHA
SO FUCKING FUNNY
HELPPPP
THEY ARE TRYNA HAVE SEX YALL
oh god i need to stop laughingggg I AM FINALLY HERE IN THE SMUT SCENE BUT DAMN
that was a real good laughhh this is soo goodddd (≧∀≦)
SHE'S BENDING HIS DICKKKKKKFUCKKKKKK HAHSHAHAHAHAHAHHAZHAHHAA
so she told him. I'm already in love hahaha. COZ WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHE TOLD HIM ALREADY. Girl, you'll live I know. Bright future. Bravooo ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Also, straight smut. It's been a while. I didn't even read... only that blowjob scene coz ngl I thought he was smol. Tiny peepee ya know. Hahahaha but alas he was not. Good for you, Duke. Nice nice.
Also, is someone watching them? That's some pretty awesome work ya know. Getting paid to watch others have sex. It could both be a con and a pro. Hmm.
long way to go tho.. only at chap 5. marinate marinate. Been reading incomplete and NEW STORIES LATELY i'm sick ╥﹏╥
There’s not much for now but I thought he already died and he’s only sober because his deadness hasn’t fully come up his head. I didn’t even consider blackout tattoo.
I thought he’s dead.
Pretty interesting. He’s freaking huge. Is this like a slice of life…? I should check the tags
drama. Hmm hmm. Will marinate.
Here’s the tea.
He told the ML to change his personality.
HAHSHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA
He’s a dimwit.
Get it?
HE’S GOT A DIM WIT.
shit’s so ridiculous HAHSHAHSHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Okay lemme explain this.
The ML has been suffering because of an illness. Ml tried to tell him na bruh maybe its you (my person) coz its your name on my chest and I feel better and see clearer now that I met you again.
And what did he do. He tried leaving the car and say no bro iz not me there’s a lot of names like mine plus (the translation pretty uhh subpar so like its kinda hard to understand at times) I am a nameless person in my understand he dont got a name in his body. He didn’t even thought of giving it a chance.
And the ml was like I’ve read it bro that there are 1% of the population that has like an unfair ruling in this supposed to be mates typa world. It must be you.
mc still denied. Then, ml tried to like sleep with me bro i’ll pay you. You know what I get it. He’s fucking desperate. 3 years of that damn illness. If you can you’ll get right into the foolproof way of getting better. If money can solve it. Throw dem cash. Money is seriously just a tool to make life better.
Is it kind? Is it respecting to the other person? Nah, but understandable. It’s not like we don’t know why he offered. Plus the mc’s been denying the MLs claims. He was tryna be like you on me. Me on you. So what we gonna do. NTM been trying to run away the whole conversation. Not giving him any chances. It was a desperate attempt really.
Also, I really am on the MLs side. At least he makes sense. The mcs a fucking dimwit. I feel bad he got paired with that kind of personality really. I hope they built a better character.
He’s a moron, alright. And idk if it’s the translation that’s making him even more stupid but he’s so dang pointless. He was scared because the ML knew he grumbled. That ipad part. Man, brain dead. My brain died. Coz why in the heck he got scared coz of that.
He’s got some pointless worries. Puts a plastic personality. Hidden animosity. And just overall miserable.
If it was on the MLs side that was being followed. I’d read this. But the mc is such a shit character. I don’t want to be polluted by a shitty way of thinking.
I’m still at chap 12. Good luck to the ml. The damn mc is such a wackass dimwit. Bye.
He’s so fucking miserable and it’s all because he bottles up shit. And his hidden animosity. Urgh, he’s actually getting insufferable.
Expecting thanks from people who’ll drop you in a heartbeat just to not be blamed? How fucking pointless.
Damn.
I WISH THIS NEVER ENDS ┗( T﹏T )┛
I love this so much