I think your tools for translation are fine, but please do re-read it and fix the grammar, that's if you want to actually improve as a translator.
Or idk, learn Korean and translate these as an exercise (I've seen other uploaders do that here, you do you tho.)
Just please don't straight-up copy paste the translation because it really feels that way.
You don't really have to do anything I said because, like I've said before, you do you. I understand that this is an illegal site and we shouldn't really expect high quality, but it would be nice if the translations were more understandable.
Thank you for your effort, though.
Both works are great, but in terms of understandability, I realized that I prefer the novel.
The comments are sensible to non-chinese people, and the gameplay is more understandable.
Hero (the game they play) is actually a MOBA game with turrets, lanes, jungles, and bases. That kind of stuff. If you don't know what I'm talking about, just search League of Legends.
I found it weird that they have some kind of custom avatar and can roam around in some open-world kind of place, when the game is in an arena. But idk, maybe it's a mix of both or something.
I just feel like the representation is still kind of wrong in the manhwa.
I would like to recommend reading the novel as well. I think you'll have a better understanding of the story + in more detail. If you're the type that doesn't wanna imagine / has trouble imagining, you could just look at the manhwa for reference if that works.
I just really want y'all to see the novel QwQ
To new readers:
- If you are looking for story, this might not be the best place for you.
- If you can take a not-so-serious plot (kind of like a pure pornographic plot), this should be fine for you.
- This can be either funny or just weird depending on your mindset.
- R*pe is involved. It may only be ass-licking and fingering, but it's still r*pe.
That's all for now, good luck.
Why couldn’t I have found this when i was about to read the manga