ok does anyone know if the story is maybe written by someone else than BJ Alex? Coz I cannot imagine that this author suddenly got just so shit at character development and general storytelling......
BJ Alex has its major flaws, ofc, but there is gradual progress, and the characters are more complex than what we see here... like I swear Dan and Jaekhyung are so comically one-dimensional. One is pure evil, a fucking scooby-doo villain. and the other one is a ball-less doormat. And that's it! There are no even glimpses of them being more than that (ok ok yes I know Jaekyung was nice ONCE when he was drunk and he was bullied as a kid - but these are two grains of sand on a beach of fuckery. he's to evil tho for it to redeem him now)
Correct me if I'm working but at this stage, I mean 50 chapters, we got some progress in BJ Alex, no? SO WHAT IS GOING ON HERE??????
You r literally speaking my mind rn. This is everything i wanted to say! Bj Alex wasn't perfect by any means but it looks like a fucking masterpiece compared to this...
There has been next to no character development for these characters(especially jaekyung) since chapter one and it's been 50 GODDAMN CHAPTERS! I see no way of redeeming him as a character at this point. Like he's too far gone. And same goes for Dan. I remember the bottom from bj alex having such a satisfying character development. Dan's helpless doormat attitude is also getting annoying like it's hard feel bad for him at some point
Idk man. 50 chapter seems like a lot for this kind of story... Like barely anything valuable has happened to their relationship. If u cut all the useless violent sex scenes u could probably fit the story up to this point in less than 10-15 chapters.
It's hard to fathom that absolutely no development has happened to these characters in 51 chapters
Well I'm not the author idk what's on their mind but i have read even more fucked of novels where the couples fall in love at the end and story finishes there so all i can do is criticise the uke and seme as well the author plus console myself and others by saying it's slow paced cause it's definitely on a pace of snail
that made me tingle inside damn men in love are so beautiful