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What even is this story man.. everyone needs to take a pit stop and chill out. This is literally just smutty art as chapters
And who's complaining about the smut? Isn't that what we're all here for?
Dunno about u but I was here for the story, didn’t care if there was smut but it’s basically every chapter with a hint of story telling
Trust me, most people reading smut are here for the smut, otherwise, they'll be reading Shounen Ai or Shoujo. Maybe you should try those too.
Ngl… I need to see Ilay GROVEL more before him and Tay become a couple. That other xin lu guy pisses me off, I hate that Tay is so oblivious to even the smallest of tactics and his manipulation. Ironically, Ilay is more real to him than Xin Lu at this point. Though, I can see Ilay changing, there has to be ALOT more coming from him in order to be with Tay. He’s such a sweetheart and it hurts seeing him cry or get hurt. This constant rpe coming from Ilay is horrendous (I know he’s supposed be morally grey), but this is beyond grey, he’s straight up psycho. If it wasn’t for Tay I would’ve stopped reading this ages ago, no one aside from him and Ilay’s brother are likeable, heck even Tay’s uncle is questionable atp. And where is this supposed twin brother of his? I thought their bond was sacred but I guess not. I know he wanted to divert paths but still, knowing that your brother is basically stuck and needs help doesn’t sit right with me, especially if you guys are so close. Poor Tay is just getting the brunt from everyone