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Honestly this is a really well written story if we focus only on the two protagonists and no one else. I do get a bit bored at some parts, even if they are essential for the plot (like who's that blue hair guy again lol), do not like that the younger brother is in love with his sister and how the adopted parents don't realize how disgusting and difficult it would be for Lariette to change her mindset to properly marry a guy who she saw as a brother her whole life. Like she grew up as a common woman, not in the monarchy where you're brainwashed to think incest to this level is okay. Growing up as maybe like cousins might be pushing it but as siblings is where you gotta draw the line. And I honestly don't care for Tori. Her death in the previous timeline is more interesting than her immortal-loli-assassin thing going on. Like I lost all interest once her true nature was revealed because she's a walking edgy 80s-90s shoujo trope. I mean this whole manwha seems to be a modern 80s-90s edgy shoujo trope.