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I LOVEE the FL and her best friend, they’re so adorable and honestly the story would be 500% better if it was just about them finding their true destinies as friends with each other and not a man..
Assuming the ML is the grand duke, he’s weird and pushy and a huge red flag (not in the good way) and his behaviour honestly feels really creepy with how he takes advantage of her not being able to say no.
The brother is so funny LMAO love him
2nd and 3rd MLs are both cute 10/10
Art is SOOO beautiful
But ultimately I will be dropping this simply because of how much I freaking hate the ML he’s so gross

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Ew, I hate Elise and I hate how he just.. forgives her?? What the fuck? I hate how NO one properly apologizes and lets him grieve properly. Elise is creepy and gross and no idgaf how shitty her backstory is, she is a GROWN woman who should be able to act like a damn adult and not literally turn a normal guy into something that doesn’t let him pursue his own life. Disgusting behaviour.

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The plot is genuinely stupid.
Dropping at ch.10.
So, you mean to tell me that she’s a self taught BRUTAL assassin, but has no measures to fall back on if her target doesn't die, lets idiotic people into her ‘guild’, doesn’t know the difference between potions, doesn’t know how to properly conceal her identity, has a severe weakness to teaching people (see lost knight in the woods) and doesn’t understand it could kill her, and somehow falls to a graze from a bullet despite the hundreds of times she’s fought and killed with guns?? How does ANY of that fit her character??
This is so insanely irritating and I’m sick of authors trying to write badass women and making them stupid, predictable, and downright boring.

This author always has interesting plot lines, but HORRIBLE character writing. The FL is an idiot, everyone else is 1 dimensional, and the chapters are bland. Pretty art but it’s so mind numbing to read..

Very pretty art style, but imo yet another interesting story ruined by a boring and predictable FL. ML is refreshing and interesting, kids are cute, but dropping because of FL..

dropped at ch.4!
IDIOT fl, genuinely so aggravatingly stupid.
pretty art but everything else sucked

Would genuinely rate this 0 stars if I could.The FL is mind numbingly stupid.. I can’t stand it. The plot sucks, characters are 1 dimensional, and in my brutally honest opinion- the art is not good enough to carry all those bad traits. (dropped at ch.19)