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The story itself Is just not well written.
I read the entire thing hoping that maybe it would get interesting. But really each chapter was hell to read. I was literally reading to get it over with.
Also. Why the fuck is rape so romanticized. Really the only good character in this damn story was Ryu (the uke's friend). They atleast had a brain and could tell the signs of abuse.
Now don't go saying 'oh it's just fiction'
This was still an ass story.