This is just obsessive and gross. He’s bothering doc dan, following him around just because he wants to fuck. If he was such a great fighter, he wouldnt need these weird sex superstitions to be successful.
Even without the messy translations, the story itself is confusing. What exactly is MC’s goal? If he wants to support his otp so bad, why did he accept the confession in the first place? And why did he go on with the relationship if he was just gna act awkward and ship his boyfriend with someone else the whole time? I like the premise though.
I really felt bad for her at first but she’s starting to annoy me. I can’t even imagine how awkward this would be in real life
Them talking about happiness not lasting forever kind of scared me lol like the author was about to show one of them in a car accident or something
Like they actually talked about what was bothering them and worked through it together??? My jaw is on the ground. This is a first for me. Can’t all stories be like this
Yes, girl. Don’t let everything go his way. The FL from In Between could learn a lot from her.
Except, irl its probably wise not to let a man you just met into your house if you’re all alone (even if he has a handsome face)
Theyre honestly really cute. I just don’t like how it all happened so fast. Like they just met, barely know each other and a few weeks/ months later theyre wearing matching rings (basically marriage in the bl world) and thinking about moving in together. But thats just how fictional relationships progress ig
Ive never laughed this hard before like im not even kidding snot dripping out my nose while im cackling at this
The way it goes from absolutely beautiful to the most menacing artsyle shocks my mind and body
Kind of sick of the whole “went into heat in front of an alpha so we had sex” trope
This is the kind of bitter sweet ending that somehow makes you feel at peace
Who reacts to being drugged by being worried about the person who drugged you…
ML is such a freak (and not in a good way)
I feel like in an actually good story, the ML would be the antagonist
Had a happy ending and the relationship between Eddie and Jay was quite wholesome and respectful.
The plot made me go “…??” in several parts but if you read without thinking too hard, you’ll enjoy it
Story was really cute.
Also, I kind of agree with what the blue haired guy said. The mc was really bad at fighting and how should I put it.. slow at reading the situation? He has a good heart ofc and believes in justice, but since he hopes to become a cop, he should probably be more wary and have some basic fighting knowledge right
This is just some side stuff that I bothered me though. Would recommend this story if you love light-hearted romance. Dont expect anything intense and sexual. Ending was slightly unsatisfying but still happy ending