great chemistry b/t author and editor, the other guy feels forced. also, there was no conflict in this 3p as soon as they confess, that would only imply either they don't really love author or they share a deep bond themselves.
imo there are better 3p stories like koitomo triangle and sankaku opera
whats the deal with chunwoo and taesoo? hoin you should drink your sorrows away with your handsome friend then wake up naked in bed with him the next morning (problem solved!)
i'd hate have a mom like tomoe who can't even take care of her own kid yet is supposedly helping other children. sounds like an excuse for an irresponsible parent.
the story would be better w/o 2nd half of c66 - first half of c77.