Um I don’t know how to feel about this story for the flow is average and so is the plot I rate it 6/10

It is a good read but i irritated wtf is with 20 up it makes no sense or is that just me

Chesney cal created a topic of Ashtarte

Sigh it good but rushed honestly I dislike that part it would be a 7.4/10 for it was rushed and in my opinion they could of extended the story to and give us sneak peek at their child and see if they would of got back together with family honestly I understand pov of people saying the family were scum and she should give them the time of day
In my life I have a scum father who abandoned me I have to take legal action for child support and my stepmom dislikes me and my biological sister abandoned her pride to be spoiled by my dad and my step
My mom is the only one who hasn’t abandoned me though honestly she has mental and physical health problems and has been a pain in the butt but I can not find it in to hate them because I am not perfect either
In my opinion I like to say I hate but I don’t I dislike my family and I love these stories and hate them because they teach me so much about life in a psychological aspect

For a complete review such simply twisting stories of that people and emotionally it has a thrilling read of tangled yarn, I wanted to kill and uh no longer kill characters for I struggle reading over drama filled stories so recommended this 100%

For a complete review such simply twisting stories of that people and emotionally it was a thrilling read of tangled yarn, I wanted to kill and uh no longer kill characters for I struggle reading over drama filled stories so recommended this 100%

In my opinion good but fast flow art is good compared too others however not the greatest art
3 chapters in it interesting but I will let it simmer for a year then read it

No update it said it would be back in 3 months it been almost a year sogh

No don’t tell me I read it just for it to be dropped ╥﹏╥

Chesney cal created a topic of Dracorun

I just started reading this how can it still be dropped

Damn well I have to probably wait a year before reading this again it to short too read now lol but it awesome

Chesney cal created a topic of Golden Mage

In my theory why he came to that world is because their goddess new they were corrupted so therefore they are her target and not saintess and I believe that he will prevail against the evil that they have become lol a goddess is supposed be a beacon of hope not evil

Chesney cal created a topic of Look at jasmine

It on a line of scum and trash and possibly good

Chesney cal created a topic of Daddy's Wild Oats

I like the story but cheering scums are the worst he could of been honest about everything and he got
Karma but I feel like he didn’t deserve all of it though but most of it

Chesney cal created a topic of Golden Print

Awww come on… what is with anticlimaxes it bad for my excited brain and thumping heart lol

Honestly I love this manga 8.5 out of ten for pacing, art 7/10 not super consistent in art but really good art overall, -1 for the posting errors and-1 for jumping between reason of the fight with silver the fight came out of nowhere though I know the reason it like taking 3 steps forward and one step back same reason with the treasure room scene minus one I find the story does a lot of bad flow so I would give it 4/10 however even though that is case it still a brilliant story it just needs improvement though it is on the line of being understood

Um

I like this It good material and read ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄