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I waited for this to be completed for so long and i had high expectations, but damn. The omega is a little unlikeable and moreover immature. It had been fine if they gave him some sort of character development, but our boi stayed the same throughout the entire thing. Further, it was all too sudden for me. Where did his feelings come from? The alpha on the other hand, I really liked. Still, the story was lacking and towards the end it was the same thing repeated over and over. Fight, Hospital, sappy reunion. ON REPEAT. There were parts I enjoyed, but I definitely won't reread this and wouldn't recommend it either if you want a genuinely good plot.