FUCK BRO. I NEEEED THE 2ND LEAD NEOWWW..... I get it, Mc always ends up with the main lead but this time around I wish he didn't :( 2nd lead was so cute !! And he even confessed and basically got no response. The character was basically dropped!!!! (I didn't read extras or side stories) I wish there was some angst shit with main lead and Mc was like idfk he got trust issuses now and 2nd lead helped him recover and love again :( that would've been perfect /hj story was very cute though! Lovely art!
Honestly this is one of the cuestest stories I've read omfg!!!!! I don't remember any of their names so I will try to keep this simple.
My favorite character is the red haired bully. He's having what looks to be a start of a lovely character development I'm really hoping he and the chubby girl become close friends or something! But I also noticed he blushed once at little birdie? I know most stories have more then one love interest but I hope red head isn't one! :(
Also I wish birdie was a little more grown up looking. She looks like a child in most scenes while everyone else looks grown up. you can still be cute without being a child !!!! :P I really like the main love interest though! He's funny and cute once we got to see more of him.
I'll be real... my mind was switched off for all of them except the last one. I cannot decide if the last one was cute or weird how fast he decided to fuck the dog once it turned human LMFAO
Unlike some here LOL I actually loved the ending. It had a very good ending. I liked how it was shown some of the bits of their lives, and leaving the rest up for the readers imagination.
This was a very well written story I believe. Personality for my taste there was a bit too much NSFW, I mean, I'd love more fluff and angst but nonetheless it was amazing. I honestly did tear up when they died in their previous lives. It was a very well written death. Their relation ship, while I found it strange in the beginning, it really grew on me even if I don't like the whole "taming" and "controlling" theme. Honestly If it had less NSFW I'd definitely recommend this everywhere but it's a bit embarrassing. Though I'm definitely going to recommend it to my boyfriend :D I'm sure he'll love this too. I saw a comment say they were greatful for the ended with the new life but personally I liked the original ending with them dying. It was a tearjerker. 10/10 story and plot. 10/10 art. Overall 9.5/10 because the constant nsfw
Everyone worshiping eve, when Adam is right there. HES SO FINEE
This comic was a roller poster, I did in fact read it in one day lmfao so I can recall this all clearly. Here are my thoughts:
Starting off at the beginning. Listen, I love NSFW as much as the next guy but having it in the first chapter, the "first time" the characters meet is a bit insane and forced.
The NSFW seemed constant, as soon as we'd get into the lovely angsty plot it'd be interrupted by NSFW, either via flashback or some of the characters deciding "ah, I really want to have sex!!" Lmfao. I'd love this story a LOTT more if it was more story less sex. You might be thinking "well just read a non smut story.." I should be able to enjoy a story with smut without it being CONSTANT lmfao. This felt sort of just like straight up porn.
Main character. The Mc was COCK HUNGRRY it seemed to be all he talked about whenever something important to the story wasn't happening. Also the main characters background wasn't explained a loooot but it sort of was. I don't know if I just didn't see it but we never got a mention of Mcs dad, only his mother.
The pink hair dude, he was really weird. I liked him a lot until that whole bit where he was sexually assaulting main characters ex. Like who kidnaps a drunk and puts a gag on them
Talking about sexual assault!! I feel like a LOT of stories can be AMAZING without sexual assault or rape. It really dulls the story down and makes it not stand out from many stories now a days. The part where the Mcs boyfriends uncle sexually assults Mc I felt was unneeded, I didn't really see a point in that scene though I could be wrong.. I do believe the same effect on the story could have been had without the uncle touching Mc.
I'd say this is a middle rating. 3.5/5 maybe even 4/5 because I loveee the art!!
I'm not a professional author so I can't really give amazing criticism, but these are just my thoughts reading this comic :D
(BTW [spoiler] WHEN MC TURNED INTO THE WHITE WOLF LIKE HIS MOM?? DIDNT EXPECT THAT, I WAS YELLING BRO. THAT WAS HYPE)
It was very cute and goofy. I didn't exactly like the nsfw scene, it seemed a bit forceful if yk what I mean? Like it was forced in the story. I know he masterbated about him and sex is obviously the next step I guess?? But like it just didnt feel like it fit in. I wish they got together and took it a bit slow, especially how the science guy (sorry I don't remember names lmao) was so aggressive in the beginning and he became so passive in the last chapter. I loved it other then that!!
I wish there was more chapters. I didn't really like how he kinda got sexually assaulted then fell inlove with the top tho
HELP WHAT?? I DONT LOOK HOW MANY CHAPTERS THERE ARE EVER BUT I DIDNT EXPECT THERE TO BE JUST ONE?? This is so good so far thoughhh!!!
HAHAHAA HES BALLDDDD (guys I'm also cursed.. the guy I like is bald too..)
I love the older man + younger trope. God I just love older men
I love the badass bottom trope!!!! They're so cute!!!
I love the art style, thus is probably one of my favorite art styles. The last story was very good, portable my favorite put of the bunch.
Very nice!! I liked the semi angst in the first one, and I didn't expect another but I was pleasantly surprised! It was very angsty and well written. I don't usually like angst but I loved this. The art and story was made out perfectly, I hope the author and artist gets the recognition they deserve!! :D
Supperrrr cute. I always see BLs with super Japanese/white people, with pin straight hair, so it's nice to have some curly hair once in awhile :D I feel represented