Your art is pretty. (sorry for this criticism is advance) Your stories were, for lack of a better word, terrible. They were RUSHED, there were so many chances for a better, longer story line. And it would have been much much better if they were child hood friends not brothers... I don't fw incest.. But please keep up the good work on your art :)
appreciating the artist for making him look like an actual child version of him, not their adult face on a baby body.