
I liked it even though it seemed to jump around. It was sweet in the sense that Tatsumi only had eyes for Shuuji, but I feel that if a plot is gonna go this direction, then more animosity should be built up between characters:
If Shuuji was kept as blindly loyal and caring, then Tatsumi shouldn't have so quickly caved to his feelings. Shuuji would have to chase him and put up with whatever abuse until Tatsumi finally accepts his feelings as love and then repairs what he has done
Conversely if Tatsumi continued to be so forward, Shuuji should have been less receptive. Shuuji would refuse Tatsumi's advances, have to deal with whatever abuse due to Tatsumis frustration (being wrongly channeled), cope and then gradually accept the amends from Tatsumi.
I don't actually mind the brothel aspect, since brothels have been around forever. Plus the prostitutes in <most> yaoi manga are treated quite well. (It's logical that you not try to leave/escape someone who owns you before paying them back- a slap was generous compared to the possible senarios/punishments that could've been)
Gosh I forgot what I wanted to say...

Axel is such an ass... but he's dealing with some fucked up (alter-ego?) so like, I get it but....He's a bit douchey and then he's sweet.... then like rapist weirdness...and back to sweet. Like is he just waiting to savor his "taking" of Anya OR was that little " I like you" sleepy talk something that somehow reigned in the creepy as his salvation? I'll never know with that smirk he had...

1. This is the first student x teacher (I've seen) that have people's panties in a twist.
2. It's smut and a one shot- why is everyone complaining about it being shallow?
3. This is Yaoi. Period.
4. This. Is Not. Real. Sooooooo, why are there so many complaints about how wrong it is? After your first 100 or so yaoi it should be pretty clear that "wrong" happens alot. (ie incest-bro x bro- bro x cousin- bro x father- bro x uncle, twincest, student x teacher, beastiality, so on and so forth)
5. No penetration prep. Always cringe-worthy but didn't ruin it for me
This has potential. The trauma from the molesting/rape could make for interesting development like...
Seiji eventually stops his asshole attitude and comes round, THEN Hinata (after much snot and tears) really wants to be with him but they have to work together to overcome Hinata's past and finally become intimate ^^
Even tho right now its just pain, Pain, PAIN. The end.. so cruel. Oh well, only the first chapter. Just gotta get the wheels turnin