beta
I’m only about 10 chapters or so in but this girl has the survival skills of a pufferfish. Even when she bled all over the place and the dad said “I’ll grant you a wish” why did she not ask for the boy then, just say “I want that boy to be my doll” instead she says it after he’s already been beaten and shot with an arrow
She runs away and doesn’t even try to change her appearance, you don’t think it would be easy for him to track someone with bubblegum pink hair??? Just pretend to be sick on the day he comes in so he doesn’t know what you look like, change your hair and cut it, and hide girl.
Also her father is literally the devil I do not know why she keeps trying to act sweet in front of him, she needs to pretend to be evil instead, you literally cannot reason with this man.
I’m taking a break for now cause I’m getting frown lines reading this