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The beginning was interesting but at a certain point it just felt like the author forgot about how it started and basically started writing a different story. Most of the plot points they set up early on were just abandoned, the psychological twinge it had in the beginning left, the mc's backstory and driving motivation just was forgotten, they basically threw out the whore mc premise, side characters just stopped playing a major part until the end, and most crucially, the mc and ml were basically different characters at the end. Not because of character development, but because their personalities changed.