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The beginning of the story is quite confusing, as if being thrown into chaos without enough information to understand what is happening. Additionally, why do most of the knights under the ML have anger issues? Can't they sense the atmosphere? Even if she's a prisoner if the emperor is favoring her then as a faithful servant/knight you must trust your Emperor's judgement (cause they pretty much have a reason behind it unless they're insane or under a spell) don't get me wrong they can be on guard, be suspicious and treat her like an outsider, but they should not manhandle her like that. ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ