This is so beautiful, it feels sad, melancholic and sweet at the same time. Feels wholesome. I love it. Been a long time since I've read such a good story.
Ok calling him a freak while sucking him off in a roof cause that's so normal
Right? Lol
It's the face. He's prolly making a very scary face. Or at least I hope so, cuz if the boy run things are gonna get a lot more complicated.
I love that Yuyang haven't seen Like Huan but he was the first one to touch him when they crashed. The man was eyeing you, boy, he got it bad.
But the pacing was all off. Why was Lihaun in the area, why did he see him? Very convenient for the plot, but really Lihaun appearing if by magic to save the day, at a festival filled with hundreds of people was a bit ridiculous.
In one of the last pannels LiHuan said to XiaoYi something like "Take care of her until my race is over". It's a Track&Field event, LiHuan's sport of choice is running.
Yeah, it's an event full of people, but YuYang is pretty visible among them, since he is staffing. LiHuan may have never showed up to him just to keep a distance and let YuYang think of an appropriate answer to his confession, for the sake of not pressuring him.
Why was LiHuan in the area? Because he goes to the uni too and is participating in a race so naturally he would be around the tracks at that time.
Why did Lihuan see yuyang? He probably had his eyes on him the whole time, plus watching the race only to see the girl crash into him
i agree
The point is the author is skipping all of these details which provide continuity and context. Having Lihaun appear out of nowhere was just bad pacing, and made the scene very cliche "magically appearing saviour". There should have been a panel or two that showed the context of the race (that was never mentioned before), showing maybe Lihaun warming himself up, some internal dialogue, and then seeing the crash from his viewpoint. Just because they are at the same university and race, doesn't mean it's obvious that they will bump into each other like that, especially when there are likely hundreds if not thousands of other students in the same area.
At my school (with about 500 people) we have this annual event where we do sports... So naturally if you like someone you'd watch them (don't know if you ever liked someone) ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Just wait for the next chapters, maybe Lihuans pov will be shown later ...
Also if you don't like the story you don't have to read it, you know?
More like the point is, is he fucking prince charming that can fly in the sky past the crowds to him? Its so cliche and so out of nowhere. But hey its cute so blah blah blah. No shit he's here but wow made a chapter just to show they made eye contact...
I found it believable because LiHuan was anticipating being in an upcoming race and YuYang was in a prominent place to help participants find where they needed to be when their event started... it made perfect sense to me.
It really didn't due to the pacing. Lihaun appeared out of no where like Prince Charming. He's not sitting across from him, but at a busy, loud sporting track with barriers. The chapter should have made reference to this sports event (as it seems out of place for a university setting, it doesn't appear to be linked to the Sports Science dep. or light hearted like you would expect an informal competition to be), show Yuyang on his way back home making reference to his unpaid job as the supervisor at the race, grumbling that he is being made to do all of these roles. Show at the race Lihaun preparing, where exactly he was in the stadium in relation to Yuyang, his perspective of seeing the woman run into Yuyang and his thoughts. Don't just have Lihaun pop up by magic, some awkward eye contact then him doing what he is told. If they weren't communicating, then lets here Lihaun's thoughts about this more and why he has been unable to contact Yuyang, or even in this chapter phone him after he took the woman to the infirmary.
yesss
Guys, I didn't see nothing wrong with the pacing. I knew he would show up the moment the girl lost control. Not that it's clichê, but right after the confession, of course he would appear out of nowhere in any circumstance. I dunno, the flow makes perfectly sense to me.
LOOK AT JUN'S FACE look at him throwing "love" at her like he always talked like that. That's development. They're gonna be real cute together.
Look, I can deal with lots of things in yaoi and lots of different characters types, but this seme is soooo fucking dense, omg I can't with him, not today. He's seriously annoying.
Weird I find the uke even more annoying.
I agree. I like the uke but I find him way more annoying than the seme. Quite frankly someone finding the seme annoying suggests that that person has never had weight issues in their life to be able to trivialize them so easily.
Well that's bs , lol. They said the seme was annoying because he's dense, not due to him once being fat. Don't go projecting your insecurities.
I mean, you sucked the dude's dick and put it in you ahole, what's a little jealous after this?
They r just at the stage of straight up lovers. Of course. This means the earth is flat as f and that they will PBVI end up togetherrrrrr
Jeeeez they're so freaking DUMB TBH but I love it, I couldn't stop laughing.
Rika's "I'm cuter thoooo" LOL Rika knows what's up
The thumb down was a mistake, sorry. I totally agree with you
Awwwww I'm so glad they talked and at least Skyler cleared up everything! Now I feel like it's much more safe to accept him, little by little, cause what these guys need to work out is time. I'm loving it. (▰˘◡˘▰)