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I READ IT AND...
YES THE ARTWORK IS AMAZING. STUNNING. SLAY QUEEN FOREVER and yadayadayada.
YES WORLD BUILDING IS GOOD. NOT REALLY HARD TO FOLLOW AND yadayadayada.
Ngl, this is so SLOW incase someone decided to read it with their impatient ass, then you better DROP it.
Why it is so slow? Her internal monologue about how insecure and low self esteem she is progress about more than 30ch-ish. Which, I dont mind but for some, that shit is too long especially in ch60-ish you realize she doesnt have any intention for revenge. She is a good girl in nature and there my ass so ichy cause I love me some revenge. I'm a hateful bitch so her positive energy just not my style. BABY YOU NEED TO KILL THE BITCH (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Her and the youngest boy really heal something in me (づ￣ ³￣)づ They so cute I like them but the boy got himself a 90ish manga boy's eyes. Please dont change, I love it (≧∀≦)
THE DAD.. is certified DILF (▰˘◡˘▰)
I'm not hating blondie (yet) because her mother is the source of her life choices. Not saying she aint bad, but her "vilainess" side comes from her dear mother.. so hating 14yo girl who her whole life only choices is dear mother, my asian ass couldnt hate her completely (yet).
I just hope it didnt turn out like Lady Baby