I'm at ch 13 and its exhausting. I'm not even complain about the plot cause the plot is great but the ML... ┗( T﹏T )┛ ugh. He exhausted me with his cryptic word and shit. AND I'M NOT DUMB, I know he must have some grand backstory and everything but if I'm the FL aint no fucking way I'm gonna listen to his shit that man isnt properly explain things either so why I need to fall for that kinda man?? (￣∇￣")
Wait? What about Mari and her brother? I hope they got away before the treason act. And the doctor?? Omg now I care about them bcz FL cared about them （/TДT)/
I dont care if he is a ML but the way he took FL's hand is IRRITATE me. 4th class rapist behavior.
Pepe(*k) is cunt in my language
Just name her Penny bru (￣∇￣") not like Korean Penny would be written as Penni-eus ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
This is what happen when you make story at 15yo and got an okay to publish when you are 20ish yo.
Ngl, the premise is good. Die, wanna know why you die, and want revenge BUT GOD HELP ME WITH HER USELESS STUPID DECISION IN EVERY MOVE.
You almost die (again) because of horse and a man save your ass and called out your FULL NAME but plot twist you already died 6 month ago. HUH, so how does this man so sure its you? Aint no way he from the future too riiiiiighht (〜￣△￣)〜
You tell a maid to deliver a letter so daddy can pick you up after long sleep-over, well you know damn well the letter would be read by those brothers and high risk for being stolen but the next night, you went to hire an informant for the bitch that your ex husband fucking on the side? WHY NOT HIRE SOMEONE TO DELIVER THE FUCKING LETTER FROM THE START?! The bitch can wait. She not going anywhere and you cant do shit to her too since the bitch isnt yours at all.
The ML is someone from royal family and a soldier of shadow...? Why not captain? He got money to have one guild.
And what part gave a long ass sword to a fucking twink of a lady a good idea? She stabbed a guard that trained and DIE..? I know the guard isnt dead but 2 of ML followers did said he would die if they let him which means that twink of a lady take long ass sword and stab him hard enough for him to bleed and die. FUCK THAT.
And for her to ended up IN THE DUNGEON ITSELF like..?? WHY THE FUCK YOU STAB THAT GUARD THEN?! Just let them take you.
Oh look a NEW GUARD as USELESS AS HIS LADY. Fucking let his lady in coridor to fecth a water, bro put her in her room first! Mf your lady aint a special guest in that fucking household. Let his lady gone and LET HER BE IN A MAN ROOM?! MF YOU ARE HER GUARD! SHE A WOMAN, UNMARRIED, SLEEP IN A MAN ROOM AND THAT MAN IS IN THE SAME ROOM TOO!! If I'm your lady, mf I'm gonna executed you for being DUMBASS and tarnish my purity, you fucking bitch.
The horse ride scene? FUCK YOU.
I know all of this for plot device but Jesus take the wheel for every unreasonable shit she did. Moreover these chara is the one that we supposed to like. The one that we are not supposed to like is more shithead with teenager tantrum and idiotic-stank ass brain.
The boygroup look like they are over 35 ╥﹏╥
The fuck with the girl group's center? She be touching man while she just DEBUTED and in a plain sight daylight too (￣∇￣")
I get that we still dk what his grand revenge plan for the nepobaby BUT BROOO WHY TF YOU MAKE THE SAME COMPANY THAT DRAINE YOU TO DEATH A FUCKING FAT CHECK? Which part that is a revenge?! They even sit next to each other during award (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ Thats means nepobaby still not discover as a plagiarist.
YOU ALREADY PLAGIARIZED SOMEONE, JUST GO WITH RIVAL COMPANY AND TOOK CREDIT FOR THEIR DEBUT CONCEPT (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ At least not that company got fat check
I like how author gave me wake up call through Malcom to reliaze something is off with Andrew. If its not because of Malcom, I probably gonna hype him up for being SO OBSESSED with his man
Ch 12
They FUCK.
Slutty daddy have big daddy under his palm. Priest's puppy on duty for traitor couple and got bored. Show finished, priest's puppy got called for something happen to the priest. The priest in one of the tent bj random dick.
Ch 13
Priest's puppy looking for his owner while reminiscing about his past love for Fiona and the bitch but then realize about his feeling(?) for his owner who is super kind and yadda yadda yadda, he found his owner bj random dicks. He almost killed the random dick but the boss of random dicks talked about shit idk and have 3 OTHER UNDERAGE BOYS on the same tent. Dk what they talking about I cant read shit.
Priest talked about his past, getting rammed by alot of man since little like 5 or something and his dog cried. Not wanting his owner got touch by anymans else, he fuck him infront of the boss who also took one of other underage boy. Dont forget random dicks also fuck the other 2 underage boys. Priest's dog look at the boy (the one with the boss) and I think he feels guilty or someshit.
Ch 14.
Priest got back idk to slutty daddy mansion or maybe priest house dk. Both twink talk about their plan and a little teased about priest and his dog relationship. Slutty daddy say bye bye and give priest forehead kiss.
Slutty daddy ready to go, his horse carry big ass long sword but then incest couple arrived with the pm. Something happen in the palace, someone do something that made the bitch need protection and flee the scene. The one who protect is big daddy. The traitor couple run. They also talk about beheaded. Now slutty daddy transform to became VILLAIN SLUTTY DADDY.
You have a way with words