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Okay so the start was great and everything and damn every little interaction they had was actually electrifying. The way that Manzhen touched Shen Fan's ear... I wanted more of that sensual skinship. Well apart from that the storyline was actually interesting and I was excited to unravel the mystery. Welp, the author could've done better with it. First of all what's with the Shen Fan getting shy even though she boiled someone's parts and saw all the remains in sink? I mean hello? Don't act like a girl in love when you saw all that disgusting shiz. Well anyways I assume she has some kind of weird ass kink or something lol. And yeah she's a world class hacker and didn't even think of informing someone about her location when the Manzhen left her alone in the home? Just inform your dad through that computer girl. Okay moving on, the story would've been 10x times better if the assualter was actually Shen Fan's father. Like that would've been such an interesting and complicated storyline. Instead, it was just that drug dealer for whom Shen Fan was working. Like girl, you worked for the person who r^ped you and also killed so many people brutally for him...that just doesn't make any sense. And that ending was wayyyy too chill for the overall tone of the story lol. Anyways it was a good effort overall