
I feel like the part that pulled people to reading this was the revenge against the brother and sister and i feel like that was over so quickly same with the fiancé i feel like the rest needs more development to be as interesting. it was too easy for her to win over her siblings and idk the romance between her and the guy feels like it went too quickly and i don't feel a thing when i see them together
Screw the love triangle just have them both
Now you, kind person, are very smart lol