Uhhhh Rishar, I get that you're protective and all but isn't you going rn one of the worst choices as your pheromone could make Etienne react and undo the unstable disguise magic?
Also why would she trust smt she's never used before?? And not even mention it properly to Etienne (like at least how long it's going to last)?? It seems straight up dumb considering the importance of their plans/continuing to hide his identity???
I feel like this started off cute but has become more and more like weird self-insert fanfic. The characters have zero depth and feel like such caricatures (basically everyone except for mc and fl are either bad or incompetent, we see very few repeat interactions with them after they've served their purpose). The more I read the more it feels like some 30yos fanfic about some girl they liked in hs, and it's a bit odd that as a grown ass adult he feels romantically towards a minor
This would have been so much better if they used their own original setting/characters rather than trying to butcher all of the greek gods and genderbend them. Honestly the story itself is cute but everytime they introduce a new god and have their character be a 180 of what they are it just feels so off
AHDHDHSH THIS IS SO GOOD!! Also love that they had an open-ended ending for this, hinting at potential romance for our female leads but not forcing it in any way! Truly a hidden gem, the characters are all so real and the growth that they experience throughout is so well written, what an amazing read!!
Bahahaha the last doodle for blind date dude has me cackling XDD
Just an oval ahahaahahaha
Did the original scan group drop this? The translations keep getting worse T^T
I don't think so. Demonreader group steals other scan groups projects up to the newest chapter then pumps out badly translated chapters asap.
Got whiplash from that surprise yuri development ahahahah
Somehow has become more boring, everything falls into place so easily, and it all feels so linear. Like all the items he needs, he gets them immediately, whether it be in game or miraculously from the company at the right timing. Even with lucky's "death" it was solved so quickly and easily and so it felt completely glossed over in the end and almost unnecessary.
Ok kinda weird but if he said he was gonna raise the kid I assumed he was actually going to do so after the kid was born esp since the elves didn't want to have it and made it pretty clear. But then he waits like 5 years (in the meantime they're mistreating the kid (doesn't even have a name for 5 years wtf and idk how else they're emotionally abusing him for him to get so attached to mc so quickly) and then when he gets the kid he's like oop ok who's gonna look after him cuz I'm too busy with stuff. I don't get it, why did he say he could/wanted to look after the kid in the first place then? It feels off and just want to know if he actually gets more involved or not??
Oh yeah, I also thought that was really annoying. Like why wait for 5 years to pick up the kid when he very well knows that he'll be rejected and isolated the moment he's born. But actually, he's only looking for a baby sitter because he has to work to set a good example of a responsible parent.
Lol I'm glad I'm not the only one that thinks that XD
Imo it would've been better to just stick with what he's been doing with mastering different crafts and having fun that way rather than trying to make him out to be some saintly character but then not actually taking any responsibility for his words/actions? Like sure 5 years is nothing for him now, but he lived as a human before too??
Lol I'm glad I'm not the only one that thinks that XD
Imo it would've been better to just stick with what he's been doing with mastering different crafts and having fun that way rather than trying to make him out to be some saintly character but then not actually taking any responsibility for his words/actions? Like sure 5 years is nothing for him now, but he lived as a human before too??
Oops it posted twice
It wasn't 5 but 2 years which means the kid would be 1 years old in human years and that would make sense. That would be around the time a baby would start eating solid food and starting to walk and talk. And if there WAS an error with the years and he meant 5 then that would make the kid 2 ½ which is a toddler which would make more sense to actually send a kid off then a baby that still needs his mother's milk.
The stories all felt kind of rushed and didn't really have endings, (or even really beginnings?) It just felt like reading excerpts from something else where I was missing the context and then as soon as things started making a bit of sense they just ended, as abruptly as they started.
Like for the first story, what was even the point of introducing a new character (the adoptive son) and giving so much info on him if you're just going to end it? It would've been great if he could've helped jesse get over his grief by sharing some more things from seere or smt, but literally as soon as he's introduced it ends??