
i still like this but man it could use polishing
c5 generally had me like ??? they just decided for her? ok, who's saying what? why's ml's hair suddenly completely different in the span of a day (i mean probs volume change but author; consistency???? only pointing it out because i kept confusing him with the younger brother.) and then the black haired student got me baffled, too. "i thought i'd just be a side guy at most." "goodbye. my sweet first love." biiiiiiiiiiiiiitch, pleaseeee. this from the dude who said she could only be his concubine????????? like, what??
chapter 6 also a bit ??? but not nearly as much. just sort of feeling rushed? like what all happened with the evil sister? suddenly she has memory loss? and then the rumor shit?
AM I THE ONE MISSING STUFF HERE?
the "lil bro" going on a whole ass emotional rollercoaster and never learning