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im going to give it a 4/5 stars. I don’t think it deserves five stars because it felt like it was lacking some thing. Obviously with a short story, that’s only 30 chapters. You can only draw out emotions for so long so it’s hard for an author to make characters fall in love when they are enemies to lovers. Because the switch up was very quick and usually feelings, don’t really happen like that. eddies kiss was very random, there wasnt any tension in that part of the story. The stalker case was very interesting, adding into the plot line Of the whole reason why Eddie needed a bodyguard in the first place, And I liked the fact that it was two stalkers instead of one Making the storyline more unpredictable. But we never learned the backstory of the stalker and why he had the obsession with Eddie in the first place. And why was Ethan Not suspected and put in his place earlier, even though it was obvious, and even the bodyguard noticed it? Some of those details are just a bit off to me.
Overall, it was a good story. I liked the basis of it because I love a good enemies to lovers, but the problem I had with it is that it was lacking tension and emotion, but it was a good story dont get me wrong.