I hope this doesn't turn into a love triangle where they are fighting over Peep including the new Mystery guy. If that's the case I rather for it to just be poly. Let peep have all 3 of them.
I kinda wish the plot would speed up a bit. It's like we are getting all these chapters but it feels stagnant no progression. All this dialogue and I honestly feel nothing. But I get It I guess it has to build up for a dramatic effect. And the author is trying to make it realistic. Maybe I'm just to impatient which is another reason y I don't like slow burns. It always feels like a lot of nothing is happening leaving me feeling unsatisfied after each chapter and I feel like I wasted time. Like those shows where they be on the same episode for 3 weeks and no progression. Every week your like okay we're moving on but no you tuned in and they're in the same scene with the same clothes talking about the same thing dragging it out. I can say so far the story going as I predicted I knew the other girl wasn't going to give him up. & Neither is the FL. I have a couple theories. Also No hate to the author this wasn't to bash the author this is just something I feel while reading. Take it as grain of salt.
S/N: I really want to know the ending and I want to stick around to see her finally be free of him and things that bound her but when it's to slow I get bored. At this rate we might hit season 2 and no progression.
I'll admit it's certain parts I'm confused on but this seems really good so far. it's a bummer it got dropped
The fact that they have age gap of 15 years
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I'm going to be dropping this I can't do incest stories. But I've read this is something the author does with their stories add incest storylines. && It's not my cup of tea I also felt so bad for Edgar poor guy is being used,betrayed, manipulated by everyone and all he wanted was to live an ordinary life.
Jun is semi trash
Carmen is pitiful trash
The sister is manipulative trash
The fiancee Dumb trash
Even his coworkers are Hating trash.
Glad this didn't drag out and they are communicating to each other. Communication is what they lack most in this relationship.
It's been awhile since I seen a uke so desperately chase after a seme to get him to sleep with him. To the point this feels like coercion a bit. But nonetheless it seems like they both like and want each other.
Also this keeps pondering in my mind his father married his mom thinking she was a(whatever it was) to produce a child. Soooo was he going to rape his own kid? Cause I don't understand why he wants to sleep w/the uke unless that's the only way the powers/luck will work. Cause if anything him just hiring him and keep him beside him should've work too. But there making it seem as though sexual contact is the way. So what exactly was he going to do towards the Seme.
Idk I kinda like their relationship. It's like a push and pull. Neither are push overs and have a strong will. So it's kinda refreshing to see something other than the weak omega and pitiful alpha. It could be just me but sometimes I get tired of reading about the omega who is so weak that a breeze of air scares them and just be ran over by everyone. && Here comes the alpha trying to be super saver who just ends up giving into the omega whims and being bossed around like a dog for so called love. It's nice to see 2 people have a goal and are determined. I'm sure feelings are developing but it's not their main goal. I'm sure it'll probably be change to the typical omega x alpha dynamic soon. But for now it's nice to see.
He gonna keep him there ain't it? Make it where he can't leave. I hope nothing happens to the little boy wish he could've took him too.
Hi I remember reading a comment awhile back in regards to each character being pretty much morally Gray. Everyone pretty much has a backstory and no one was really a good nor bad person. I tried to go back and find the comments but it's so many. I remember the reason Oscar treated the FL that way was because of her brother killing him for revenge. But I can't remember if he really did like her in the beginning. So did he? I wanna say I did see a comment saying he treated her well in the first years of their marriage. But I'm not sure. And if he did why did he switch up in the later half?
Does anyone know if this will be updated?? It's really good
I wouldn't be surprised if the reason he broke things off had something to do with his family maybe his dad. It seems like he really does care for him so I do believe it's something that we are missing. Either that or he was insecure within himself and felt like the Uke deserved better than him since he is kinda messed up mentally by his father.So he ended things out of fear. Hopefully it'll be revealed soon. I really would like his point of view of their relationship and his thoughts.
This is one of the stories that you just can't take seriously.You just got ride it on out & keep your morals at the door.I always like Dragons and Snakes smut stories cause you always get 2 for the price of one
This started off hilarious and now things are getting serious idk how to feel just yet
Well that was mature of him. Glad he recognized he doesn't and shouldn't force anything upon him.
Everything aside I'm glad she realized that it's okay to like things other than what's considered "Normal". And I'm glad he found someone who isn't going to judge him and allow him to feel comfortable. I like that both are learning that it's okay to explore your sexuality. It's nothing wrong if you have different desires or taste as long as it's not illegal and bring unlawful harm towards others. I'm honestly excited to see them learn and grow together within the bedroom and out.
I just know everyone in that household finna be a crying snotty mess
Well that's just weird and unnecessary plot twist but okay.
Wish it wasn't open ended I like closure it's a personal peeve of mine. I would've been fine either way them remaining just friends or them getting back together.
It seems like the direction it was going was for them to give their relationship another go.It like that's what the author wanted but do to so many people being angry over that being the ending. It was left open ended. But since it's open ended my ending is that after the party they became friends again. 6months after that both were comfortable enough to hang out with each other in public and private. A year after that the uke practically started living there from being there all the time he practically has his own toothbrush there and extra clothes there & of course the seme loved it. Then one night while they were watching movies and drinking uke stared at the seme and kiss him out the blue. One thing lead to another. Next day they decided to have a sit down and lay everything on the table where they agree to give the relationship another chance. Then they live happily ever after.
-That's my ending from the vibes I got.