Before I start this is it incest? I seen the summary mention brothers. && I'm honestly avoiding incest plots like the damn plague. I consider step & adoptive siblings/family members incest too.
Wtffffffffff Omggggg excuse my language but GAWD DAMNIT THIS SHIT IS FUCKING GOOD! Wowwwww OMG wtf I wasn't expecting any of this. I love when I can't predict a story!
Not gonna lie I'm kinda confused on what's going on so is the brown hair girl on the evil side or hero side? Her coming through the portal and then saying she's in the book makes me think she's a hero. Maybe? Or is it 2 different people?
This is surprisingly good. I was thinking that he was pregnant at first when he said he was sick and then ate a whole box of chicken. Cause on there first time together when they were drunk they did it without a condom but he said he can't get pregnant so I'm going to shelf that idea.
His dad story is pretty sad he lost his lover, was on the run from a crazy killer, living in the woods trying to keep his kid safe just to eventually having to give his child up.
I really hope the ML really does love the MC and wants to be a family since it's something they both lacked. I don't think he wants to bring harm to him or his son. Since they pretty much imprinted each other so feelings are always going to be there. I feel like this will be a good opportunity for them to sort out their feelings for each other and communicate to each other
I hope this doesn't turn into a love square. Those 3 fighting over Peep just be in a polycule.
does anyone know any more stories similar to this?
He definitely looks better with long hair wish he would've kept it. To be honest could just be my bias but I feel like characters look better with long hair. Idk it makes the character seems majestic/mysterious like I automatically want to know their story. Long hair gives an illusion.
My Good sis is trying to get her cheeks clap or at least a booty rub I love that he is so aloof of her wanting affection. He's so adorable I like the pacing of their relationship.
She's definitely Gonna peg him at some point. I'm glad she is starting to enjoy this too it's good that now they both can figure out what works for them & each other. And since she's enjoying it as much as him i'm sure he feels more comfortable and accepted. They do need safewords tho cause she did lose control a couple of times. That could be a problem in the future. Hopefully we get to see some aftercare as well.
Lol the little cats was a nice touch it express the same emotions as me reading
Also I just realized he said "what do you want to break up?" I thought it was her. The audacity to say that then in the same breath tell her she can try.. TF!?! I want her to crush him so bad
Author pleaseeeeeeeeeeee don't let her go back! Please please please. Let her be through with his ass. Write her packing up all her shit and leaving him there. Have her ignore him like he is non existent. Give her a makeover and some confidence. It's okay if she cries for a bit but not to long. Just Please don't allow her to crawl back cause she thinks if she doesn't have him she has no one. Cause I feel like that is what's going to happen she will allow him to sleep around just to keep him. That she will allow him to do her dirty a couple more times before leaving. Us readers don't want that no matter how realistic it might be. Let our girl find happiness let her release this relationship PLEASEEEEEEEE
If she just doesn't leave at this point then idk. It's not like she is forced there she can just quit. But she wanted to get fired instead so that she'll have an excuse for the mission failing. But damn that mission I would've left. If she willingly decides to stay after this....... Then this might sound harsh but..... I.....will turn off my feelings of feeling sorry for her. Cause at this point your inviting danger she has choices but she isn't using them because of the rebellion. She can quit this house and she can leave the rebellion since they dc just like her brother. However, if he prevents her for leaving by using force or her life than I'll understand.
My thoughts while reading
- Lol ouuu not him trying to start another round yea baby 2 loading..
-Huh why he staring at that baby like that? Ion like that...
-Omg he finna kill that damn baby ain't it? lawd Jesus noooooo please help him somebody please..
- Oh ok whew false alarm lol he ain't that crazy. I'm tripping. Aww So cute he loves his baby look at em.
-ouuu there so cute father and son cooking breakfast.
yeaaa 1 more won't hurt
-Naw baby that ain't got nothing to do with his rut he just damn crazy.
-Oh uh not he done found the file ouuuuuuu shit finna hit the fan.
-*Him watching cameras* Oopp jumpscare.. Damn Looney tone. He looks good tho.
-Awww such a cute family
-Huh? WTF why he blocking the baby?
-"You my Everything" omggggggggg this bastard is crazy crazy! Somebody call CPS! He needs to be in JAIL!!!!
-*End* WHAT IN THE THE ENTIRE FUCK!
He definitely should've told him cause he finna be rough and turn him each way but loose. Especially since he appears jealous thinking someone has been touching him.
Awwww I love Chris he's such a cutie I hate that he has and still is experiencing hell within that opera house. I'm kinda worried about this little love triangle forming. At 1st I was thinking maybe they're the same person his mated partner & the guy in the mirror but as it goes on I don't think so anymore. He isn't going to be able to choose the between them 2 it's going to be so stressful for Chris. & Honestly I don't want to read a love triangle.
I figured it would lead to this but I thought he would've waited a bit more since he loves the chase. She doesn't realize that the more she despises him & refuses him. It's just going to make him want her more. Especially since he is use to getting what he wants voluntarily or involuntarily & since everyone fears him it comes so easy. But not her she has a fighting spirit she's a challenge something that will keep him entertained for awhile. It's sad cause eventually she is going to have to concede at certain points. Cause he isn't going to let her go no matter what she does. He isn't going to let her quit neither he will break every bone in her body and throw her in prison to keep her from leaving. She ignited something in him that he hasn't felt either before or in awhile and he is trying to keep that feeling.So it's probably going to be times where she thinks she has the upper hand but she isn't not fully noway he is a calculated and will always overtake her.