Why are these authors always finding the most cringe and disgusting ways for the main characters to have sex? Why not make them developed and multi dimensional or atleast any kind of chemistry between them, it’s so uncreative to use this “I’m a hunter so my hormones are higher than usual” as a reason for him to be a rapist and get away with it. Not reading past ch 7 and regret wasting my time
It actually annoyed me so much that the mc even CONSIDERED that the ml slept with his brother. ML defended himself so well and he’s so right for kicking him out bcs wtff?? I would be so offended - I used to and still rlly love this story but this chapter was so ??? I’m so lost on where or what point there relationship is at I think we need a side couple or something to fill this hollowness also what happened to the chemistry between the two? I feel like it’s gone
The side couple is ....
Tbh, I never felt like this couple had much of a chemistry aside from the sexual kind. I understand your frustration with the argument in this chapter but I sincerely feel like it’s way more than mc thinking ml could’ve slept with his brother. From the start, ml has been so secretive about his past and it’s clear that mc has opened up more than ml. Mc was probably ok/thought he was ok with ml sleeping with clients initially but the longer they date, the more he realised that he feels uneasy with ml’s secretiveness (WHICH IS COMPLETELY OK BTW, your opinion can change). Especially with the ex appearance and everything. The brother is just a catalyst that turned mc’s anxiety into doubt. It sounds like I’m just blaming ml but clearly both of them are at fault and this convo could’ve gone better with better coms from both sides :,(
It’s also possible that I’m reading too much into everything and mc simply went into panic mode and tried to do damaged control out of jealously. Which failed lol.
Yes to all of thisssssssssss!!! I think you summarized it pretty well! Like you said, I feel like the MC thought he would be okay with it and maybe he was at first, but now that he’s actually experienced it, he feels differently.
Reading this has changed my pov actually and I think i was a little harsh on the mc I just feel like he should have a little more trust in the ml and should know he wouldn’t do something like that especially knowing that he knows who his brother is but I do now see he is just really anxious about him sleeping around and being secretive even though it’s part of the job , I just feel like these two shouldn’t even be together, it’s a real shame because I think the story started off to strong
I knowww!! I’m still routing for the both of them though! These two could definitely be a power couple whenever they decide to get on the same page
he’s so loveable and sweet and arghhhh such a green flag , ROOTING FOR THEM !!!
I’ve been reading the spoilers in the comments and I already dropped roses and champagne after ‘that’ chapter so I think y’all saved me from the ‘torture’ to come I think I will drop now
stop because i was going to drop roses and champagne but i PRAYED it got better- an tbh it kinda did
ahhhh shit what does 'that' chapter Entel? cuz I had put that one on pause at chap 20 for a bit n was gonna start reading again...now i'm hesitant Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
SPOILER
oh you stopped at chapter 20!? well i mean the mc gets r4p3d by the ml and then they start dating sooo- idk if thats much or a spoiler but i think it is. in my opinion i think it got better for them but idk <( _ _ )>
Spoiler:
The ml shoots the mc and then rAp3s him immediately afterwards it’s pretty fucked up given the context and time in the story
AYE YOOOOO (⊙…⊙ ) thats fkn wild jesus
The only thing interesting about this story is his child, there is absolutely no plot and just SA, the semes proportions are ATROCIOUS and the dynamic is the same old shit , the art is also kinda…bleh
the over explanation of everything is driving me insane , sometimes simple things like a conversation takes up multiple pages because the uke is overanalysing something simple that’s been said and it’s exhausting to read like why can’t as a reader I think for myself and theres so many flashbacks ALSO I’m not feeling any chemistry between the uke and seme despite the build up , the uke seems to have a poker fake/ lack of expression like Alllllll the time even during sex but hey the story is worth the read
The bodyguard the mother hired is so FINE GOOD LAWWDDDUHHHHHH HE IS HAWT the artist knows how to draw semes that’s for sure
istg this story is soooo good to read between others bcs they be stressing me tf out , this is so mf ARGHHH!!!!!!(づ￣ ³￣)づ
This is the most interesting story I’ve read in a long time
Like YAH I get he has a cut on the inside of his mouth wooptie doo it could have been anything innocent like biting his cheek yes the cut is big but why does he have to assume something nefarious happened like I get where it’s leading but I gotta roll my eyes rn
It's instinct. He's a warrior. His Boy toy is the son of someone he killed. He's the reason why the boy is now a slave. He has all the reason to be suspicious
it's his personality. he wouldn't have gotten that far if he wasn't always assuming the wostt