
Genuinely who is this for? It's like elementary school -level writing but they just had to add the erotica part. It's so bad it's not even funny anymore whoever let a wattpad writer loose, please come and collect them
Also what kind of "poor orphan" wears luxury dresses and can indulge in high-quality wine??
And wasn't she an actress or acting major in the modern world? It seems like the bare minimum of "keeping facial expressions in check" is already too much for her.
YES WE GET IT YOU'RE SO PETITE AND HE'S SO BIG AND STRONG PLEASE LET'S MOVE ON ALREADY
The ML is a ridiculous thing like you just spent five pages talking about how tiny and fragile she is, why is the first recreational activity you propose is HORSE RIDING? The famously exhausting and dangerous one?
I'm honestly concerned for the people being governed by someone who'd be outsmarted by an amoeba.

Could someone please tell me if the church/religion will be forced upon the mc and portrayed as something bad, or will it be shown as something that she wants to pursue and therefore a good thing?
I'm already feeling quite icky about her "second"(?) name and how they want to take away a literal infant from her only parent cause of some yappery of a prophet or whatever.
Just wanna know if it gets better or worse lol

I really tried getting into this because the rating is good, but it's just painful There's zero chemistry between the main pair. I don't even know why they like each other and I've been reading for hours?? Their every interaction is so awkward it's like they're on a verge of divorcing without even being married
I love the mc so much he's hilarious "Guards!! Seize him!!!" "Go my soldiers!!"
Omg just talk to him dude why are you sending your minions after him
Ahahaha you are so right he was like "this is not a drill i repeat this is not a drill all forces attack" he got me laughing so hard rn (≧∀≦)