Is it just me or does this feel all over the place? Are chapters maybe not in the correct order? Are certain things not properly explained? Is it skipping wayyyy too much? I can’t tell but it just feels like nothings connected.
i think some stuff is getting skipped over but to me its still mostly understandable.
from what i gather mc and fl were in the same hs. at the beginning of their hs years in a live drawing session mc couldn't draw fl due to the wall she puts uo between her and other people but mc is the only one who notices this. mc gives up art due to realizing the difficulty of majoring in art, this happens in front of fl. mc is embarrassed and avoids fl for the rest of her time at hs. on the last day of their last year mc is playing a game w friends she cant answer why she hates fl (she doesnt btw) so picks up the punishment cards. it tells her to kiss the person she hates so she goes to kiss fl who is being confessed to by the schools hunk (lol dumb word) afterwards school ends and mc is embarrassed so she runs off into the countryside for the entirety of summer break before uni. shes no contact w basically everyone including fl. she meets fl at uni again and is embarrassed remembering their past this causes her to shrink. she has a adventure being small. fl finds her and takes her back to the dorm.
and tbc ig lol. hopefully this helps u understand better
I love this and binge read all 73 chapters… but it just feels like it’s moving too fast. They went from kissing eachother on the cheeks to talking about marriage to almost immediately her getting pregnant. It started off as a real slow burn but now it just feels like the creator is just trying to end it asap.
It’s not terrible, but, and this is really rare for me to say since I’m huge into romance mangas to the point I can’t read one unless there’s romance in them. This would be way better off without romance. Like the story is perfectly fine without it and everytime it shows anything close to romance is just a huge turn off for this story for me.
It’s alright but unfortunately there’s a bunch of missing chapters here and there.