So I am reading on webtoon to help support the author, however, I wanted to come here to comment to see if anyone has the same thoughts as me. I really like this story, the plot is good, the art is amazing, however, ..something feels..empty? Like, I see that the main characters have chemistry, however, it doesn't really show WHY they have chemistry if that makes sense. Usually in stories there will be more conversations between the main couple to help build the chemistry, but in this one there wasn't a lot of interactions it seemed outside of them having the pool day and even then they didn't really discuss anything. Idk, just a thought I have. I still really like the story and would recommend it :)
Oh yeah definitely! I understand that romance isn't supposed to be the main focus of the story but I wish there was more alone time with the leads. We've seen them talk alone a few time but it was always interrupted by an even or another. I mean for now the only reason they're attracted to each other is pretty weak, Davina finds Gabriel physically attractive and she likes that he's a good father and Gabriel is attracted to Davina bc she's beautiful and because she'w a strong woman who takes good care of Mikey. It's cute but it's nothing "personal"
Why did I start this when it only has 30 chapters?! I knew better *runs to cry in a corner*