A Trace of the Wonder
The story is interesting but the couples romance is lacking. the authour didnt really made it clear how deep they love each other its all very surface level stuff. there was no build up just plot point that suddenly apear and cause a ruckus just to be over in a few chapters. the "realizing my love for you" scean is not giving, they couldve made it more emotional with more hard hitting lines (they just repeated a same line "ur want to die is greater than your love for me") i know the authour was trying to give this a dark undertone with the art but the storiy is not pushing towards that direction, i Wish the author gone more deeper with thier emotions and thier relationship, but over all it was an ok read.
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