Cause I can see the potential in it but I fear that I will not be continuing to read this past another chapter. I'll give the 3rd chapter a chance but if it doesn't start looking better by then I'll just have to move on. The first chapter was literally all over the place going from him being abused in his uncle's house to being a young adult visiting the orphanage he used to live in within mere pages. The transition is very sloppy and I feel like there's just way too much going on at once with the characters. All in all it just feels like a half-assed rush job to fill in the time the artist had inbetween doing major works.
This would have been so much better/easier to comprehend if the translations were a bit cleaner. A lot of the dialogue was lost thanks too poor grammar and spelling. With the poor dialogue the story went with it and left majority of the readers confused. I love this artist but this one left me more confused and unsatisfied than reading wrongly tagged shounen ai.
Straighten these chapters out. I'm getting tired of getting overly-excited for the new updates only to find out you guys are jacking around with the 23.5 or 24th chapter. Just please, pick a chapter number and stick with it.