And we all breathed a sigh of relief when we saw hiatus instead of a chapter
So I hate the pink haired guy. I’m on chapter 2 and he’s giving away the “medicine” that’s for the black haired dude to some random person at the convention I- WHAT THE ACTUAL F*CK?! What “nurse” just drinks whatever they see lying around in the DOCTOR’s OFFICE?! He should be FIRED WTH!
This doesn’t make sense. Why is he listening to Cha more than he is to what Kang says? Why does he care more about what Cha says than what Kang says? Cha is the EX BOYFRIEND. That means they BROKE UP FOR A REASON! They are no longer together FOR A REASON. Why is he acting like Cha’s words are the be all end all?!
Wait did they take Feng’s sperm and keep the baby hoping that it’ll have the heir birthmark? Wtf?! That’s not your baby!
Also, I know that that is not Feng’s sperm. It’s YiYi’s but they don’t know that so
Why does the last chapter feel like Zac and the MC are paid actors pretending to be in a relationship? And it’s not even good acting. It’s bad acting. They have zero chemistry with each other. Actually, the MC has zero chemistry with any of the characters.
Yuki: this is the first time we’re spending the night alone together
Also Yuki: has spent multiple times alone with him behind his boyfriend’s back
Me: ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
I liked that they’ve communicated their thoughts and stuff fairly quickly and we’ll in the beginning. Does that continue as the story goes? Conflict bc two people just choose to keep stupid secrets for no reason annoys me. Do they continue to share what they see and think and feel and stuff throughout the story?
Haha so I jinxed myself. Just after I wrote this and clicked to the next chapter, there was communication conflict. *sigh* why can’t characters just SPEAK? It’s not hard…
Okay I finished the story and they communicated a bit better after that part. Also it was better bc the MC figured it out quickly so it was okay. But this was great!
Is this BL?
No its not it should've yaoi / shiunen ai tag if it is
No its not it should've yaoi / shounen ai tag if it is
Stories don’t have to just be rising action, climax, falling action, resolution. That’s not the only story structure to exist in the world. It’s perfectly fine for stories to just show a person‘s life during a set amount of time and explore some random events during that time. Just bc the typical “even climax end” structure is the most common and well known doesn’t mean that other structures are wrong or bad