
It’s like twitter made a manga tbh, it’s lecturing me and I don’t like my porn lecturing me.

I would have considered that but there’s porn every chapter, so the author wants to be profound but also there’s porn but also equal rights but also there’s no development everywhere.
Like idk commit to one thing.
I know reading comprehension ain’t anybody’s fort here but this aint good writing just because the author posts text and texts of cute nonsense that goes nowhere all the time.

Is this your first Asada Nemui manga?
Tbh I’m not gonna take the word of what is or isn’t good writing from someone who is complaining that a story has a story, lmao.
Slow burn isn’t everyone’s cup of tea, sure, but I’d easily say Nemui is one of the best yaoi mangaka (in terms of story and characterization).

“They’re clearly not meant for each other”
Did you read the story? They were both miserable apart, and kept thinking of each other. They really wanted to make it work and they’re both making an effort for it. Both of them had issues and they’re working on them and their relationship together.
They really love each other that much.
My dude is like 50, total shade the 19 year old is being extremely obvious at this point and he’s 50, he should be able to tell the baby is flirting with him.
If the author wanted to stretch this part focus on the fact that precisely he is 50 and cannot see himself with a old, for a number of reasons but making him not notice at this point is taking me out.
bro is depressed bc worked for 50 yrs in his life trying to save the world, he is an unknown hero and his parents are dead already. you think he can pick up social cues like that???
As far as we know none of those years ever included dating?? How are you suppose to pick up on those social cues if you’ve never had experience with them, older or not? Being depressed and the main thing on his mind being literally his future death could also be a factor in him not noticing a crush but yea, hard to pick up on things you have no experience with